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January 9, 2012
By babyrex4 SILVER, Buffalo, New York
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\&quot;You may only be someone in the world, but to someone else, you may be the world.\&quot;<br /> <br /> Author Unknown

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Buzzards fly sky high,
Swarming something down below,
There has been a death.

© Courtney R., Great Falls, VA

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bookworm1000 SILVER said...
on Jan. 10 2014 at 9:16 am
bookworm1000 SILVER, Monroe, Connecticut
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Good poem!  It's very deep and you made every word count!
LunarBirth GOLD said...
on Oct. 20 2013 at 10:02 am
LunarBirth GOLD, Edinburg, Texas
16 articles 3 photos 30 comments

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&quot;celebrate true nonconformity&quot; - LunarBirth

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I got chills!
Helena_Noel BRONZE said...
on Mar. 29 2013 at 9:41 pm
Helena_Noel BRONZE, Burnt Hills, New York
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&ldquo;I&#039;d rather see a sermon than hear one any day; I&#039;d rather one should walk with me than merely tell the way: The eye&#039;s a better pupil and more willing than the ear, fine counsel is confusing, but example&#039;s always clear.&rdquo; -Edgar Guest

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NICE!!!!!!!
Phoenix. said...
on Feb. 22 2012 at 9:25 pm
Phoenix., Pittsfield, Pennsylvania
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love it great job!
babyrex4 SILVER said...
on Feb. 22 2012 at 2:05 pm
babyrex4 SILVER, Buffalo, New York
5 articles 6 photos 191 comments

Favorite Quote:
\&quot;You may only be someone in the world, but to someone else, you may be the world.\&quot;<br /> <br /> Author Unknown

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Thank you :)
ellisak GOLD said...
on Feb. 21 2012 at 5:39 pm
ellisak GOLD, Olathe, Kansas
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Very Deep. Well Written :)
babyrex4 SILVER said...
on Feb. 21 2012 at 3:39 pm
babyrex4 SILVER, Buffalo, New York
5 articles 6 photos 191 comments

Favorite Quote:
\&quot;You may only be someone in the world, but to someone else, you may be the world.\&quot;<br /> <br /> Author Unknown

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Thank you very much! Sorry for the late reply.
JustPaperAndPencil BRONZE said...
on Feb. 11 2012 at 6:41 pm
JustPaperAndPencil BRONZE, Milford, Ohio
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The saddest thing in the world, is loving someone who used to love you.

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This is Really good ! It's Very Deep And I Love it . Keep Writing (:
babyrex4 SILVER said...
on Feb. 5 2012 at 2:06 pm
babyrex4 SILVER, Buffalo, New York
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Favorite Quote:
\&quot;You may only be someone in the world, but to someone else, you may be the world.\&quot;<br /> <br /> Author Unknown

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is spelled like that. For some reason part of the comment cut off lol :P :-)
babyrex4 SILVER said...
on Feb. 5 2012 at 2:05 pm
babyrex4 SILVER, Buffalo, New York
5 articles 6 photos 191 comments

Favorite Quote:
\&quot;You may only be someone in the world, but to someone else, you may be the world.\&quot;<br /> <br /> Author Unknown

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Thank you so much! I'm glad that you really like it enough to show your teacher :). By the way, haiku
Angelgirl39 GOLD said...
on Feb. 5 2012 at 1:59 pm
Angelgirl39 GOLD, Monument, Colorado
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I love this hakui (spelling?) We just finished our poetry unit in class, and when I showed this to my teacher, she said it was amazing (all credit went to you, dont worry) Amazing job! Keep writing!
babyrex4 SILVER said...
on Feb. 5 2012 at 10:52 am
babyrex4 SILVER, Buffalo, New York
5 articles 6 photos 191 comments

Favorite Quote:
\&quot;You may only be someone in the world, but to someone else, you may be the world.\&quot;<br /> <br /> Author Unknown

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Thank you :)
tealbird said...
on Feb. 5 2012 at 9:51 am
Good work! You definitely have a knack (did I spell that right?) for poetry!
babyrex4 SILVER said...
on Feb. 5 2012 at 8:42 am
babyrex4 SILVER, Buffalo, New York
5 articles 6 photos 191 comments

Favorite Quote:
\&quot;You may only be someone in the world, but to someone else, you may be the world.\&quot;<br /> <br /> Author Unknown

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Thank you, I will xD.
fashionlover16 SILVER said...
on Feb. 5 2012 at 8:35 am
fashionlover16 SILVER, New Gloucester, Maine
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I honestly don&#039;t know what my favorite personal quote is. I can tell u what i like, if u want that. I really like the twilight series. whenever my mom suggests that we should go shopping, i light up. I love shopping. well thats about it, byez!!!!! &lt;3

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this is really good!!!! keep writing!!!
babyrex4 SILVER said...
on Feb. 4 2012 at 4:15 pm
babyrex4 SILVER, Buffalo, New York
5 articles 6 photos 191 comments

Favorite Quote:
\&quot;You may only be someone in the world, but to someone else, you may be the world.\&quot;<br /> <br /> Author Unknown

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Thank you. :).
Aaka131 SILVER said...
on Feb. 4 2012 at 12:16 pm
Aaka131 SILVER, Dunbar, Pennsylvania
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&quot;Be who you are and say what you feel because those who mind don&#039;t matter and those who matter don&#039;t mind.&quot; -Dr. Seuss

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This is great a lot of people have trouble writing haikus but yours is very nice and well thought out. Good job!
babyrex4 SILVER said...
on Feb. 3 2012 at 1:32 pm
babyrex4 SILVER, Buffalo, New York
5 articles 6 photos 191 comments

Favorite Quote:
\&quot;You may only be someone in the world, but to someone else, you may be the world.\&quot;<br /> <br /> Author Unknown

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Thank you so much :). This was actually my first haiku! And don't worry I will :D.
MaryEllenCags SILVER said...
on Feb. 2 2012 at 7:01 pm
MaryEllenCags SILVER, Fanwood, New Jersey
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&quot;I&#039;m not an arsonist. But I am a pyromaniac.&quot; -Kieth Richards, Life

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You are so good at haiku! It's hard to be a talented haiku writer because it is such a percise and disciplined form of poetry. Post more of them! :)
babyrex4 SILVER said...
on Feb. 1 2012 at 1:31 pm
babyrex4 SILVER, Buffalo, New York
5 articles 6 photos 191 comments

Favorite Quote:
\&quot;You may only be someone in the world, but to someone else, you may be the world.\&quot;<br /> <br /> Author Unknown

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Thank you so much :D.