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Everlasting Pain
January 26, 2012
I was rejected
It feels like a broken bone
That can never heal
© Greg K., New Lenox, IL
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This article has 14 comments.
Phoenix. said...
on Feb. 22 2012 at 9:24 pm
Great Poem
it's cute because it is a haiku. i've read a few of your poems, and my advice would be to try to step a little more out of the box. like here you took a pretty cliche comment and put it to the format of a haiku, making it a little different. so my advice is just stay a lilll more away from the cliche and you'll be fine:)
britt101 said...
on Feb. 19 2012 at 12:49 pm
this is a really good poemi like it
C.K.Snow said...
on Feb. 4 2012 at 1:21 pm
This is very good poem and you describe saddness well. Keep up the good work!
MaryEllenCags SILVER said...
on Feb. 2 2012 at 6:28 pm
I feel your pain from these 17 beautiful syllables.
