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Stellar Collision

April 19, 2012
By bearsfan654 SILVER, Elmhurst, Illinois
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bearsfan654 SILVER, Elmhurst, Illinois
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"Feb 20, 1962, The USA launches John Glenn into Earth orbit. Something America could do fifty years ago.... but not today." - Neil deGrasse Tyson

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Peaceful star with worlds
Collides with another star
Making a new sun

© Allison H., Vancouver, WA

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I wanted to write a haiku about the formation of a star when two stars collide. Instead of an explosion ridding of both stars, the two stars join together to form a bigger, hotter star.
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CarrieAnn13 GOLD said...
on Apr. 20 2012 at 9:04 pm
CarrieAnn13 GOLD, Goodsoil, Other
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Dramatic, yet to the point, as haikus are meant to be.  Your syllable counting is, of course, spot-on and I like your choice of words.  "Collides" give the reader a very powerful mental image.  Excellent work!
bearsftw GOLD said...
on Apr. 20 2012 at 2:10 pm
bearsftw GOLD, Elmhurst, Illinois
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This is very interesting. Typically, haikus would be about something naturistic on Earth, but you described an action taking place outside of Earth. Nice!