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Ideal Summer

April 20, 2012
By IAmWhoIWantToBe PLATINUM, Manila, Other
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‎"I’m learning how to drown out the constant noise that is such an inseparable part of my life. I don’t have to prove anything to anyone. I only have to follow my heart and concentrate on what I want to say to the world: I run my world." - Beyoncé

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Breeze teasing my skin,
Sand running through my fingers,
The ocean waiting.

© Rebecca B., Marietta, GA

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This is actually my ideal day at the beach. It's summer but I'm sitting in front of the computer. Boring...
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Mckay ELITE said...
on Jul. 3 2013 at 3:01 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
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&quot;The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do.&quot;<br /> &mdash;Apple&rsquo;s &ldquo;Think Different&rdquo; commercial, 1997<br /> &ldquo;Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn&#039;t understood.&rdquo; <br /> ― Weihui Zhou

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Ok, so the same thing is pretty much happening right now to me. It's summer, and I'm sitting in front of my computer screen right now. (Except it's about to rain :/) I love the summer and the beaches. And this sounds like the ideal summer to me. We should schedule one day—heck, one whole week to go to the beach with a bunch of the people on here. 
JessicaQ PLATINUM said...
on May. 1 2012 at 8:52 pm
JessicaQ PLATINUM, North Vancouver, British Columbia, Other
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I love the way you described everything in this poem, I got a clear image of everything you described! Overall, lovely haiku!
dragonfly95 SILVER said...
on Apr. 24 2012 at 9:09 am
dragonfly95 SILVER, Argaon, Georgia
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&#039;&#039; there is nothing to fear but fear its self&#039;&#039;

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i like it, it has a clear message to it, and i really liked the last line especialy. nicely done :)