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Ideal Summer

April 20, 2012
By IAmWhoIWantToBe PLATINUM, Manila, Other
IAmWhoIWantToBe PLATINUM, Manila, Other
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Favorite Quote:
‎"I’m learning how to drown out the constant noise that is such an inseparable part of my life. I don’t have to prove anything to anyone. I only have to follow my heart and concentrate on what I want to say to the world: I run my world." - Beyoncé

Breeze teasing my skin,
Sand running through my fingers,
The ocean waiting.

The author's comments:
This is actually my ideal day at the beach. It's summer but I'm sitting in front of the computer. Boring...

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This article has 4 comments.

Mckay ELITE said...
on Jul. 3 2013 at 3:01 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do."
—Apple’s “Think Different” commercial, 1997
“Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn't understood.”
― Weihui Zhou

Ok, so the same thing is pretty much happening right now to me. It's summer, and I'm sitting in front of my computer screen right now. (Except it's about to rain :/) I love the summer and the beaches. And this sounds like the ideal summer to me. We should schedule one day—heck, one whole week to go to the beach with a bunch of the people on here. 

on May. 26 2012 at 9:55 am
DaisyAngel BRONZE, Sandy Springs, Georgia
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I love this poem. It is so simple and beautiful, which makes reading it almost relaxing. There needs to be more poems like this. Five stars!

on May. 1 2012 at 8:52 pm
JessicaQ PLATINUM, North Vancouver, British Columbia, Other
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I love the way you described everything in this poem, I got a clear image of everything you described! Overall, lovely haiku!

on Apr. 24 2012 at 9:09 am
dragonfly95 SILVER, Argaon, Georgia
7 articles 0 photos 66 comments

Favorite Quote:
'' there is nothing to fear but fear its self''

i like it, it has a clear message to it, and i really liked the last line especialy. nicely done :)