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February 10, 2013
By ChrisJ PLATINUM, Rochester, New York
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ChrisJ PLATINUM, Rochester, New York
24 articles 15 photos 289 comments

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&quot;Man must evolve for all human conflict a method which rejects revenge, aggression and retaliation. The foundation of such a method is love.&rdquo;<br /> - Martin Luther King Jr.

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Skin's goosebumps rise like
faulted mountain tops leaving
a rugged surface.

© Julie S., Marblehead, MA

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411Ellie PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 31 2013 at 4:32 pm
411Ellie PLATINUM, Fridley, Minnesota
41 articles 28 photos 235 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Paper is more patient than people.&quot; &ndash;Anne Frank

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Thank you so much!
ChrisJ PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 31 2013 at 3:40 pm
ChrisJ PLATINUM, Rochester, New York
24 articles 15 photos 289 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Man must evolve for all human conflict a method which rejects revenge, aggression and retaliation. The foundation of such a method is love.&rdquo;<br /> - Martin Luther King Jr.

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Wow, I am speechless......I never thought that I would be somebody's hero. Thank you for the comment, am I am ecstatic that you like my work as I like yours. Oh, one more thing: Your new Haiku, Overcoming Writer's Block, is superb!
411Ellie PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 31 2013 at 12:58 am
411Ellie PLATINUM, Fridley, Minnesota
41 articles 28 photos 235 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Paper is more patient than people.&quot; &ndash;Anne Frank

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Hi Chris :) You are my hero and inspiration. Please don't ever stop writing!! ~Fan
ChrisJ PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 21 2013 at 9:03 pm
ChrisJ PLATINUM, Rochester, New York
24 articles 15 photos 289 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Man must evolve for all human conflict a method which rejects revenge, aggression and retaliation. The foundation of such a method is love.&rdquo;<br /> - Martin Luther King Jr.

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Thank you, my friend, for the support you give me. It really helps with things.
Mckay ELITE said...
on Oct. 21 2013 at 6:34 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
146 articles 0 photos 2230 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do.&quot;<br /> &mdash;Apple&rsquo;s &ldquo;Think Different&rdquo; commercial, 1997<br /> &ldquo;Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn&#039;t understood.&rdquo; <br /> ― Weihui Zhou

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Congrats, my friend, on being a published writer once again. 
Mckay ELITE said...
on Aug. 1 2013 at 5:11 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
146 articles 0 photos 2230 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do.&quot;<br /> &mdash;Apple&rsquo;s &ldquo;Think Different&rdquo; commercial, 1997<br /> &ldquo;Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn&#039;t understood.&rdquo; <br /> ― Weihui Zhou

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Yes, yes, it did. Sometimes the best poems are the ones we doubt the most. I sure know that. 
ChrisJ PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 31 2013 at 2:40 pm
ChrisJ PLATINUM, Rochester, New York
24 articles 15 photos 289 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Man must evolve for all human conflict a method which rejects revenge, aggression and retaliation. The foundation of such a method is love.&rdquo;<br /> - Martin Luther King Jr.

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I'm astonished that you think my haiku is perfect, thank you so so much for the comment. I was actually very skeptical and doubtful of this when submitting it, I guess it all worked for the best, huh?
Mckay ELITE said...
on Jul. 30 2013 at 3:43 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
146 articles 0 photos 2230 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do.&quot;<br /> &mdash;Apple&rsquo;s &ldquo;Think Different&rdquo; commercial, 1997<br /> &ldquo;Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn&#039;t understood.&rdquo; <br /> ― Weihui Zhou

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Critiques for this? Umm...no...It's perfect. Great imagery as always. 
ChrisJ PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 18 2013 at 9:52 pm
ChrisJ PLATINUM, Rochester, New York
24 articles 15 photos 289 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Man must evolve for all human conflict a method which rejects revenge, aggression and retaliation. The foundation of such a method is love.&rdquo;<br /> - Martin Luther King Jr.

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Please rate on and leave advice for my piece! It would mean alot to me!