Buried | Teen Ink
  1. Home
  2. Poetry
  3. Haiku
  4. Buried

Buried MAG

February 10, 2013
By ChrisJ PLATINUM, Rochester, New York
More by this author
ChrisJ PLATINUM, Rochester, New York
24 articles 15 photos 289 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Man must evolve for all human conflict a method which rejects revenge, aggression and retaliation. The foundation of such a method is love.&rdquo;<br /> - Martin Luther King Jr.

View profile

Precipice of my
mouth, gasping for oxygen,
soil in return.

© Tim S., Great Falls, VA

Post a comment
Submit your own

Similar Articles

Previous Next
Poetry
Remember to Forget me
By Xinwen PLATINUM
Brossard, Other
Xinwen PLATINUM, Brossard, Other
44 articles 0 photos 25 comments
View profile
Poetry
Burnt
By Connor Stubblefield SILVER
Woodburn, Oregon
Connor Stubblefield SILVER, Woodburn, Oregon
7 articles 0 photos 2 comments
View profile
Poetry
first love
By blackrosedying GOLD
Belton, South Carolina
blackrosedying GOLD, Belton, South Carolina
10 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;flowers tear and life ain&#039;t fair.&quot;

View profile
Poetry
Western Frontier
By BreeAnn Moerbe BRONZE
Ropesville, Texas
BreeAnn Moerbe BRONZE, Ropesville, Texas
1 article 0 photos 0 comments
View profile
Poetry
The Roundup
By Connor MacNair BRONZE
Wolfforth, Texas
Connor MacNair BRONZE, Wolfforth, Texas
1 article 0 photos 0 comments
View profile
Poetry
Dead Man's Hand
By Randolph Rozean BRONZE
Wolfforth, Texas
Randolph Rozean BRONZE, Wolfforth, Texas
1 article 0 photos 0 comments
View profile

JOIN THE DISCUSSION

This article has 6 comments.

KarmaBites GOLD said...
on Mar. 22 2014 at 11:10 am
KarmaBites GOLD, Columbia Heights, Minnesota
11 articles 0 photos 134 comments
View profile
Thank you for being such a good friend, hehe. I had to change all of my info. I can explain in the forums: TeenInk.com/forums?act=post&topic_id=16&thread_id=78975
ChrisJ PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 20 2014 at 7:13 pm
ChrisJ PLATINUM, Rochester, New York
24 articles 15 photos 289 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Man must evolve for all human conflict a method which rejects revenge, aggression and retaliation. The foundation of such a method is love.&rdquo;<br /> - Martin Luther King Jr.

View profile
From a gifted writer such as yourself, these words truly make my day brighter. Thank you for being a good friend :)
KarmaBites GOLD said...
on Mar. 20 2014 at 9:59 am
KarmaBites GOLD, Columbia Heights, Minnesota
11 articles 0 photos 134 comments
View profile
Superb word choice! Congrats on getting published, Chris! You are one of the most talented writers on Teen Ink. Never stop writing!
Mckay ELITE said...
on Aug. 1 2013 at 5:07 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
146 articles 0 photos 2230 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do.&quot;<br /> &mdash;Apple&rsquo;s &ldquo;Think Different&rdquo; commercial, 1997<br /> &ldquo;Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn&#039;t understood.&rdquo; <br /> ― Weihui Zhou

View profile
Your dedication shows. And that is a very scary fear. Just imagining it makes me shudder. 
ChrisJ PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 31 2013 at 2:32 pm
ChrisJ PLATINUM, Rochester, New York
24 articles 15 photos 289 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Man must evolve for all human conflict a method which rejects revenge, aggression and retaliation. The foundation of such a method is love.&rdquo;<br /> - Martin Luther King Jr.

View profile
Being buried alive is really my biggest fear, and that was the inspiration behind this piece. This poem, for me, took alot of thought and concentration to write, thank you very very much for the kind words.
Mckay ELITE said...
on Jul. 30 2013 at 3:46 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
146 articles 0 photos 2230 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do.&quot;<br /> &mdash;Apple&rsquo;s &ldquo;Think Different&rdquo; commercial, 1997<br /> &ldquo;Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn&#039;t understood.&rdquo; <br /> ― Weihui Zhou

View profile
Frightening to imagine. Yet quite exhilarating all at once. Very well written.