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March 17, 2013
By AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
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AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
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&#039;For you, a thousand times over.&#039; - Hassan, The Kite Runner<br /> <br /> A professional writer is an amateur who didn&#039;t quit.

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Heavens burst and the
Raindrops paint pretty polka
Dots on open hands.

© Chelsea C., Auburndale, FL

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LiraDaeris PLATINUM said...
on May. 23 2013 at 3:40 pm
LiraDaeris PLATINUM, Tucson, Arizona
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&ldquo;You have brains in your head. You have feet in your shoes. You can steer yourself any direction you choose. You&#039;re on your own. And you know what you know. And YOU are the one who&#039;ll decide where to go...&rdquo; <br /> ― Dr. Seuss, Oh, the Places You&#039;ll Go!

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I like the "open hands" part the best. An important piece to add!
SaphiraBrightscales DIAMOND said...
on Apr. 4 2013 at 2:20 pm
SaphiraBrightscales DIAMOND, Islamabad, Other
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I&#039;ve learned that people will forget what you said, people will forget what you did, but people will never forget how you made them feel. <br /> - Maya Angelou <br /> When i was little/I used to point a chubby finger toward the dark sky/And ask my father/why some stars moved and others didn&rsquo;t/He would laugh and explain that some were airplanes/I still wish on them today ~ Laugh-It-Out<br /> The feathers of a crow are black/The ink of my pen is blacker/The pain of my heart is blackest~ Mckay<br /> If love produced a blossom/I&rsquo;d take it in my palm/What a blessing, the bright color!/How soothing, such a balm!/I&rsquo;d keep a petal for my own/The rest, drop from my hands/For such a flower would multiply/And populate the lands~ thesilentraven<br /> And I began to rival legends/Long entombed before my birth./But for all my much envied fame/The lust for more would not abate./The plaques and prizes with my name/Will, like all things, disintegrate. ~ TheEpic95 now known as Helena_Noel

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Sweet subtle beauty! The imagery is so vivid and exactly the way I LOVE... This is a tad bit similar to a poem of mine "See through the raindrops" but thats free-verse..and my second try at free verse and is about the raindrops as sort of kaleidoscopes..... Well not exactly but you might like it....
LunaLives GOLD said...
on Mar. 26 2013 at 12:51 pm
LunaLives GOLD, South Bend, Indiana
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Beautiful.
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 26 2013 at 6:19 am
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
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Thank you :)
compassion GOLD said...
on Mar. 26 2013 at 5:05 am
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Expect to have hope rekindled,expect your prayers to be answered in wondrous ways! The dry seasons in life do not last,the spring rains will come again.

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How sweet is the poem! I just love the picture it paints as I read. 
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 26 2013 at 4:12 am
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
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&#039;For you, a thousand times over.&#039; - Hassan, The Kite Runner<br /> <br /> A professional writer is an amateur who didn&#039;t quit.

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Hahaha :D yeah :P
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 24 2013 at 2:33 am
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
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&#039;For you, a thousand times over.&#039; - Hassan, The Kite Runner<br /> <br /> A professional writer is an amateur who didn&#039;t quit.

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Your poem was really good too! Thanks :)
Dunes SILVER said...
on Mar. 23 2013 at 12:07 pm
Dunes SILVER, Leander, Texas
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So much better than I could ever do....
readaholic PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 23 2013 at 9:12 am
readaholic PLATINUM, Tomahawk, Wisconsin
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I&#039;d rather fail because I fell on my own face than fall because someone tripped me up<br /> ~Jhonen Vasquez

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And...just realized my comment had 17 syllables..thats so weird... (ok, i'll admit, that one was on purpose)
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 23 2013 at 12:41 am
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
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&#039;For you, a thousand times over.&#039; - Hassan, The Kite Runner<br /> <br /> A professional writer is an amateur who didn&#039;t quit.

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Thank you :)
readaholic PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 22 2013 at 7:28 pm
readaholic PLATINUM, Tomahawk, Wisconsin
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Cool, cute haiku :) Wish I could say more, but for 17 sylables...
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 22 2013 at 12:45 pm
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
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&#039;For you, a thousand times over.&#039; - Hassan, The Kite Runner<br /> <br /> A professional writer is an amateur who didn&#039;t quit.

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Thank you :)
Khaoula BRONZE said...
on Mar. 21 2013 at 1:34 pm
Khaoula BRONZE, Annaba, Other
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&quot; be you ... simply one of your kind &quot;^_^

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aww love the rain <3
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 21 2013 at 9:55 am
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
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&#039;For you, a thousand times over.&#039; - Hassan, The Kite Runner<br /> <br /> A professional writer is an amateur who didn&#039;t quit.

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Glad you liked it :) Thanks :)  
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 21 2013 at 9:55 am
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
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&#039;For you, a thousand times over.&#039; - Hassan, The Kite Runner<br /> <br /> A professional writer is an amateur who didn&#039;t quit.

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thank you :) I was just listening to some really good piano (Yiruma) and thought of this :)
nakubara PLATINUM said...
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Really good! (I normally hate haikus) yours is great!
Kimberly Behling said...
on Mar. 21 2013 at 8:48 am
Kimberly Behling, Ehrhardt, South Carolina
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i think it is really awesome did it take long to write about rain drops?? but is tremendously awesome lol :)))
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 21 2013 at 12:25 am
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
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Favorite Quote:
&#039;For you, a thousand times over.&#039; - Hassan, The Kite Runner<br /> <br /> A professional writer is an amateur who didn&#039;t quit.

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Thanks, Swan :)
WhiteSwan13 SILVER said...
on Mar. 21 2013 at 12:21 am
WhiteSwan13 SILVER, Hawera, Other
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Awesome haiku :)