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Diamond Girl

April 13, 2013
By EPluribusUnum DIAMOND, Woodbine, Maryland
EPluribusUnum DIAMOND, Woodbine, Maryland
59 articles 24 photos 280 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I shut my eyes and all the world drops dead;
I lift my lids and all is born again.
(I think I made you up inside my head)."
-Sylvia Plath


Moonlight ricochets
off wind burnt hair. She smiles,
star bits in her eyes.


The author's comments:
a poem about my crush :3

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Mckay ELITE said...
on Apr. 22 2013 at 3:40 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do."
—Apple’s “Think Different” commercial, 1997
“Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn't understood.”
― Weihui Zhou

You should. Tell her how you feel. Don't deny yourself. Hey, she might feel the same way about you; you never know. Don't live life regretting the moments that pass so briefly. Later on you'll always ask yourself, What if...? Then, tell me what happens. I'm routing for you!

on Apr. 21 2013 at 6:13 pm
EPluribusUnum DIAMOND, Woodbine, Maryland
59 articles 24 photos 280 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I shut my eyes and all the world drops dead;
I lift my lids and all is born again.
(I think I made you up inside my head)."
-Sylvia Plath

Thank you sao much! Your reaction means a lot to me! :D I'm really glad you like my writing! :3

on Apr. 21 2013 at 11:37 am
SaphiraBrightscales DIAMOND, Islamabad, Other
75 articles 16 photos 1143 comments

Favorite Quote:
I've learned that people will forget what you said, people will forget what you did, but people will never forget how you made them feel.
- Maya Angelou
When i was little/I used to point a chubby finger toward the dark sky/And ask my father/why some stars moved and others didn’t/He would laugh and explain that some were airplanes/I still wish on them today ~ Laugh-It-Out
The feathers of a crow are black/The ink of my pen is blacker/The pain of my heart is blackest~ Mckay
If love produced a blossom/I’d take it in my palm/What a blessing, the bright color!/How soothing, such a balm!/I’d keep a petal for my own/The rest, drop from my hands/For such a flower would multiply/And populate the lands~ thesilentraven
And I began to rival legends/Long entombed before my birth./But for all my much envied fame/The lust for more would not abate./The plaques and prizes with my name/Will, like all things, disintegrate. ~ TheEpic95 now known as Helena_Noel

Gosh! I just love all these words! I mean every single one! Really! This is breath-taking! She woud LOVE it! Do tell me when you show her, if you do! :D Good Luck!

on Apr. 19 2013 at 11:19 am
EPluribusUnum DIAMOND, Woodbine, Maryland
59 articles 24 photos 280 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I shut my eyes and all the world drops dead;
I lift my lids and all is born again.
(I think I made you up inside my head)."
-Sylvia Plath

Thank you! I haven't shown her yet. I'm not really sure if I will or not, I try to be careful with delicate friend group dynamics, but... She's so sweet ahhhhh! X3

Mckay ELITE said...
on Apr. 18 2013 at 12:37 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
146 articles 0 photos 2260 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do."
—Apple’s “Think Different” commercial, 1997
“Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn't understood.”
― Weihui Zhou

I love the image you convey in this haiku with you descriptive words: "star bits in her eyes." Well done. Have you showed her this piece yet?