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I Am the Song

April 14, 2013
By LiraDaeris PLATINUM, Tucson, Arizona
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LiraDaeris PLATINUM, Tucson, Arizona
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&ldquo;You have brains in your head. You have feet in your shoes. You can steer yourself any direction you choose. You&#039;re on your own. And you know what you know. And YOU are the one who&#039;ll decide where to go...&rdquo; <br /> ― Dr. Seuss, Oh, the Places You&#039;ll Go!

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I'm that line of song
You knew you wanted in
But second-guessed yourself

So,

I wander in search
Of another poet
Who will sing me to Sleep.

© Crystal F., Marshfield, MA

The author's comments:
Wanted then unwanted, then the cycle repeats. Who will forever stay with me?
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EmmettHerculeLaFave SILVER said...
on May. 29 2013 at 1:28 am
EmmettHerculeLaFave SILVER, Tucson, Arizona
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&quot;We have it in our power to begin the world over again.&quot; -Thomas Paine

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My feels...
davidnolan BRONZE said...
on Apr. 30 2013 at 6:36 pm
davidnolan BRONZE, Manchester, Vermont
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Very good...I just like the whole metaphor you're using!
SunnyDreams BRONZE said...
on Apr. 29 2013 at 10:24 am
SunnyDreams BRONZE, Niger Falls, Other
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Can you feel what I have seen, when no one else has lived through what I have?-HalveOfLife

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so true i know how ya feel i dont even kno any more........ dont even kno how to trust people anymore...
Mckay ELITE said...
on Apr. 22 2013 at 7:12 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
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I think this is everyone on this site. You describe human wanting well.
country-cutey GOLD said...
on Apr. 21 2013 at 7:54 pm
country-cutey GOLD, St.croix Falls, Wisconsin
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Dont say it if you dont mean it because i might actually belive it

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ur a really awsome writer u have talent :) keep up the amazing work!
ElisaTheDuck ELITE said...
on Apr. 21 2013 at 7:25 pm
ElisaTheDuck ELITE, Rigaud, Other
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You are such a great writer! I'd read your stuff anytime! Keep up the amazing work! =D
TevyRae PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 21 2013 at 8:19 am
TevyRae PLATINUM, Pittsfield, Pennsylvania
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very, very good. i love it. great job!! five stars, no doubt about it! 
swat17 SILVER said...
on Apr. 20 2013 at 10:55 pm
swat17 SILVER, Mineral, Virginia
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I don't read haikus on here a lot, but I'm glad I read this one; great job! I love how you connected two of them together. 5/5 from me
Fallen_ PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 19 2013 at 5:48 pm
Fallen_ PLATINUM, Quakertown, Pennsylvania
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nice idea real nice
PriyaModi BRONZE said...
on Apr. 18 2013 at 11:33 pm
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I like the way i am,need no transformation,,,LOVE LIFE.

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nice thought Lia.. :)
Jade.I.Am ELITE said...
on Apr. 18 2013 at 11:08 pm
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This made me think, and I really like it! Bang up job XD
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 18 2013 at 9:18 pm
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
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&#039;For you, a thousand times over.&#039; - Hassan, The Kite Runner<br /> <br /> A professional writer is an amateur who didn&#039;t quit.

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That was really sad... And the metaphors were interesting! And Lira, you don't always need a poet to be happy! Become a beautiful song yourself! And not just lines in other people's songs. Good job :)