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Only Cold

April 24, 2013
By Eshshah PLATINUM, Galloway, New Jersey
Eshshah PLATINUM, Galloway, New Jersey
32 articles 31 photos 239 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The woods are lovely, dark and deep. But I have promises to keep, and miles to go before I sleep." -Robert Frost

Wind shrieks through the trees
Dancing, slipping through the leaves
Leaving only cold

The author's comments:
A poem written on a needless to say, very windy day.

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on Mar. 6 2014 at 6:29 pm
Canadotas PLATINUM, Harrisonburg, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
“As our circle of knowledge expands, so does the circumference of darkness surrounding it.” --Albert Einstein

This poem is really ingenius! I love how simple the concept is, yet how much meaning this can have. Great job!

on May. 27 2013 at 4:36 pm
E.J.Mathews GOLD, International Falls, Minnesota
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Love the imagery! Even though it was a haiku, I felt like I was there and I could feel the wind!

K.Klunder said...
on Apr. 28 2013 at 8:46 pm
K.Klunder, Grand Rapids, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"Live life in the moment, for everything else is uncertain" ~Louis Tomlinson

This is a great poem! It reminds me of where I live in the winter! We have really cold weather.