Every Night | Teen Ink

Every Night

June 18, 2013
By laxgirl06 ELITE, Cheshire, Connecticut
laxgirl06 ELITE, Cheshire, Connecticut
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Every night I sit
and crumble into pieces
on my bedroom floor.



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on Jul. 4 2013 at 3:08 pm
laxgirl06 ELITE, Cheshire, Connecticut
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Thank you so much! I appreciate your feedback(:

on Jul. 3 2013 at 11:24 pm
jazzwarrior GOLD, Springfield, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
Weeds are flowers, too, once you get to know them. -A.A. Milne

The emotion in this piece is so powerful. I immediately feel her sadness by the one action described in the haiku. Lovely poem!