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July 5, 2013
By ChrisJ PLATINUM, Rochester, New York
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ChrisJ PLATINUM, Rochester, New York
24 articles 15 photos 289 comments

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&quot;Man must evolve for all human conflict a method which rejects revenge, aggression and retaliation. The foundation of such a method is love.&rdquo;<br /> - Martin Luther King Jr.

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Your teeth are bridges
for your lies to cross, my heart
but an access point.

© Simon I., Lansing, NY

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vrp31 BRONZE said...
on Oct. 9 2014 at 11:59 am
vrp31 BRONZE, Mumbai, Other
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Nice work Chris!!!
Mckay ELITE said...
on Aug. 1 2013 at 5:13 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do.&quot;<br /> &mdash;Apple&rsquo;s &ldquo;Think Different&rdquo; commercial, 1997<br /> &ldquo;Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn&#039;t understood.&rdquo; <br /> ― Weihui Zhou

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I've read many (MANY!—look at the number of commnets I've made) haikus one this site, so I'm pretty sure I'm being honest when I say one of the best. Don't doubt yourself. 
ChrisJ PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 31 2013 at 2:15 pm
ChrisJ PLATINUM, Rochester, New York
24 articles 15 photos 289 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Man must evolve for all human conflict a method which rejects revenge, aggression and retaliation. The foundation of such a method is love.&rdquo;<br /> - Martin Luther King Jr.

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I wouldn't say one of the best................but thank you very much.
Mckay ELITE said...
on Jul. 30 2013 at 3:30 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
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&quot;The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do.&quot;<br /> &mdash;Apple&rsquo;s &ldquo;Think Different&rdquo; commercial, 1997<br /> &ldquo;Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn&#039;t understood.&rdquo; <br /> ― Weihui Zhou

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This haiku demonstrates that this genre isn't a trifling genre of poetry. One of the best by far on Teenink! I love how the teeth are "the bridges of your lies" and the heart "an access point".