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"Slipped from Heaven"

July 19, 2013
By cvhswriter BRONZE, Castro Valley, California
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"Step down, now look up. The possibilities are infinite for you and me. Let creativity and curiosity lead the way." - cvhswriter 2013.

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Slipping and sliding
The dangers foreshadow my
Evident downfall

© Patrick B., Stony Brook, NY

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Mckay ELITE said...
on Jul. 29 2013 at 6:08 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do."
—Apple’s “Think Different” commercial, 1997
“Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn't understood.”
― Weihui Zhou

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And I love the title as well. 
Mckay ELITE said...
on Jul. 29 2013 at 6:07 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
146 articles 0 photos 2230 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do."
—Apple’s “Think Different” commercial, 1997
“Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn't understood.”
― Weihui Zhou

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Somewhat funny, in the way that it reminds me of all the falls I've had. And very true. I love the word "foreshadow" in here. It sends the message clearly to the reader.