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May 29, 2014
By Charlie Neudek BRONZE, Mt. Horeb, Wisconsin
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One star shines alone
The moon no longer rises
We become lost

© Hoang P., Rochester, NY

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1299836 said...
on Jun. 10 2014 at 6:09 pm
1299836, 1299836, California
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brilliant! your poem captures that moment of lost hope at sea in minimal words. when i read it i imagine someone looking up with an empty look on their face to a likewise sky.