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Devil's Tool

July 8, 2014
By --Em-- GOLD, Grand Rapids, Michigan
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--Em-- GOLD, Grand Rapids, Michigan
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Shadows: the Devil's
tool to unearth hidden fears
and cause doubt in God.

© Mary A., Fullerton, CA

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violawritermady BRONZE said...
on Aug. 8 2014 at 1:32 pm
violawritermady BRONZE, Lehi, Utah
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Like others have expressed, this packs in a lot of meaning for only three lines. Well done! Never stop writing!
MalaikaJ GOLD said...
on Aug. 5 2014 at 1:07 pm
MalaikaJ GOLD, Cloquet, Minnesota
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This is great! I'm terrible at haikus, but I admire those who can put so much meaning into only three lines.
Rebecca97 BRONZE said...
on Jul. 25 2014 at 9:36 pm
Rebecca97 BRONZE, Gainesville, Florida
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It's an interesting concept, no doubt. For only three lines it is strikingly memorable.
Longlegs GOLD said...
on Jul. 24 2014 at 7:11 am
Longlegs GOLD, Greeneville, Tennessee
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Awesome! It's so short, yet so meaningful. I'm giving you five stars. I can't believe how well you packed all that into 3 lines.
CosmoPhoenix PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 22 2014 at 10:03 am
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That was a brilliant idea, and, well, packed with meaning. This is simply marvellous. Keep writing!
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I like it. You really managed to pack alot into three small lines without it feeling too cramped. Again, well done.
CheesePie BRONZE said...
on Jul. 17 2014 at 5:33 pm
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It's awesome in a deeply scary way :)
. said...
on Jul. 16 2014 at 8:22 am
 This is simple at first sight, but incredibly deep for a poem of 3 lines. Nicely done! :)
Olivia-Atlet ELITE said...
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This is awesome! I love the hidden meaning in this poem, and I am not good at writing haikus, so I am very impressed. ;) Keep up the excellent work!
Ariel_Fluffyy SILVER said...
on Jul. 13 2014 at 10:15 pm
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It took me a while to understand but when i read in between the lines it turned out pretty nice. Good job!