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Sun's Hands

July 25, 2014
By EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND, Athens, Georgia
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND, Athens, Georgia
81 articles 5 photos 1486 comments

Favorite Quote:
To love is to be vulnerable; Triumph is born out of struggle; We notice shadows most when they stand alone in the midst of overwhelming light.


The sun's hands
catching my black hair
and turning it to red.


The author's comments:
I was in the car, and I saw the sun grab my black hair and urn it to a red in the sun's light.

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on Aug. 5 2014 at 10:55 pm
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND, Athens, Georgia
81 articles 5 photos 1486 comments

Favorite Quote:
To love is to be vulnerable; Triumph is born out of struggle; We notice shadows most when they stand alone in the midst of overwhelming light.

Thank you, and also! I'll think about other things the sun does. The sun does a lot of things, I know that. I just need to think. Also, I will try to make it longer. Thank you for commenting on my poem, and helping me!

Longlegs GOLD said...
on Aug. 5 2014 at 10:53 am
Longlegs GOLD, Greeneville, Tennessee
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Great job writing personifying the sun. And also writing a poem in the spur of a moment. Make it longer! What other things does the sun do?