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Tiffany liquids

August 8, 2014
By TrishDestiny PLATINUM, Jerantut , Pahang, Other
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TrishDestiny PLATINUM, Jerantut , Pahang, Other
45 articles 2 photos 91 comments

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&ldquo;When it&#039;s over, I want to say: all my life<br /> I was a bride married to amazement.<br /> I was the bridegroom, taking the world into my arms. <br /> <br /> When it is over, I don&#039;t want to wonder<br /> if I have made of my life something particular, and real.<br /> I don&#039;t want to find myself sighing and frightened,<br /> or full of argument. <br /> <br /> I don&#039;t want to end up simply having visited this world.&rdquo;

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Tiffanny liquids
Were nothing but useless
Drop in the ocean

© Matt F., Pierz, MN

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TrishDestiny said...
on Oct. 7 2014 at 8:34 am
Awww! Thanks Gal!
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND said...
on Oct. 2 2014 at 1:09 pm
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND, Athens, Georgia
81 articles 5 photos 1486 comments

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To love is to be vulnerable; Triumph is born out of struggle; We notice shadows most when they stand alone in the midst of overwhelming light.

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This absolutely, beautiful. It's so descriptive. Simple yet powerful. It's just beautiful, haha. I love it. You have such a talent and greatness in you. :) Thank you so much, for sharing this. :) 
TrishDestiny PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 2 2014 at 9:46 am
TrishDestiny PLATINUM, Jerantut , Pahang, Other
45 articles 2 photos 91 comments

Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;When it&#039;s over, I want to say: all my life<br /> I was a bride married to amazement.<br /> I was the bridegroom, taking the world into my arms. <br /> <br /> When it is over, I don&#039;t want to wonder<br /> if I have made of my life something particular, and real.<br /> I don&#039;t want to find myself sighing and frightened,<br /> or full of argument. <br /> <br /> I don&#039;t want to end up simply having visited this world.&rdquo;

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I took about a few weeks trying to craft my first haikus, so if they don't turn out good at first try - do it hundred times if you must. I believe you can write great haikus someday! I am looking forward to read it :) And yes, sorry for the typo tho.
Nella.Girl97 BRONZE said...
on Oct. 2 2014 at 9:35 am
Nella.Girl97 BRONZE, Ashland, Wisconsin
1 article 0 photos 437 comments

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&quot;Keep on dreaming even if it breaks your heart.&quot;

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Great work! I try to write haikus sometimes but they never turn out this good! One question tho, is it supposed to be drops instead of drop? But amazing! Keep writing!