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Moment of Relaxation

December 25, 2014
By MysticMusic ELITE, Waterloo, Other
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MysticMusic ELITE, Waterloo, Other
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Favorite Quote:
“You only live once, but if you do it right, once is enough.” -Mae West
"It had long since come to my attention that people of accomplishment rarely sat back and let things happen to them. They went out and happened to things." - Leonardo Da Vinci

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Swirling honey dew,

long, elegant silver stirring

delicious potion. 

© Jiraporn R., Cerritos, CA

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MysticMusic ELITE said...
on Mar. 11 2015 at 8:42 pm
MysticMusic ELITE, Waterloo, Other
116 articles 0 photos 118 comments

Favorite Quote:
“You only live once, but if you do it right, once is enough.” -Mae West
"It had long since come to my attention that people of accomplishment rarely sat back and let things happen to them. They went out and happened to things." - Leonardo Da Vinci

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As do I. This is definitely one of my favourite works, and it makes me drown in the delicious wording. Wow that sounded self-centered. Anyways, thank you for the lovely feedback as usual.
MysticMusic ELITE said...
on Jan. 8 2015 at 9:48 pm
MysticMusic ELITE, Waterloo, Other
116 articles 0 photos 118 comments

Favorite Quote:
“You only live once, but if you do it right, once is enough.” -Mae West
"It had long since come to my attention that people of accomplishment rarely sat back and let things happen to them. They went out and happened to things." - Leonardo Da Vinci

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Thanks and I would, but I can't find any of your works.
NoniDoni GOLD said...
on Jan. 8 2015 at 7:58 pm
NoniDoni GOLD, Calabasas, California
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Pretty imagery! It made me feel as if I was on a beach chair at the beach eating honey dew! Check out my poem and give me feedback please!
BoobooBeetle DIAMOND said...
on Jan. 1 2015 at 6:30 pm
BoobooBeetle DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
74 articles 1 photo 36 comments

Favorite Quote:
“A good novel tells us the truth about its hero; but a bad novel tells us the truth about its author.”
G.K. Chesterton

"And you, you ridiculous people, you expect me to help you."
Denis Johnson

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Sweet, simply, lovely, relaxing, elegant, elemental, etc. All of these words and so many more describe the feeling you get when you read this exciting little poem of relaxation. Oh, for I wish this moment could last forever!
MysticMusic ELITE said...
on Dec. 29 2014 at 4:29 pm
MysticMusic ELITE, Waterloo, Other
116 articles 0 photos 118 comments

Favorite Quote:
“You only live once, but if you do it right, once is enough.” -Mae West
"It had long since come to my attention that people of accomplishment rarely sat back and let things happen to them. They went out and happened to things." - Leonardo Da Vinci

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Thank you!
Richcoca PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 29 2014 at 3:43 pm
Richcoca PLATINUM, Canoga Park, California
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Favorite Quote:
Make as many as mistakes as you want, just don't make the same mistake.

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That great use of imagery really does create a moment of relaxation.