Rain... | Teen Ink


November 3, 2009
By Bliss SILVER, Poland, Ohio
Bliss SILVER, Poland, Ohio
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So if I stand here in this rainstorm any longer, will you wonder where I am? If I didn’t say a word, now, just shiver and stand. If it matters to you now that I have no umbrella or shoes, as I wait here on the corner for the ol’ painters muse. Your old, Mazda
SUV is what I long to see. But I wait in heavy rain, and think you forgot about me.

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kenna2013 GOLD said...
on Mar. 21 2010 at 3:08 pm
kenna2013 GOLD, Corinth, Kentucky
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Favorite Quote:
"love begins with a smile,grows with a kiss,and ends with a teardrop."

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on Nov. 26 2009 at 11:53 pm
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't gain the world and lose your soul....wisdom is better than silver or gold."

"You can always close a book, but you can never close the mind of a writer."

i like it! it has a different type of ring to it, and i like the flow. creative and very good! :) check out some of my work and comment please, id love your opinion. oh and keep writing! :)