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No need to remind me

May 14, 2010
By inspire.identity. PLATINUM, Ajax, Other
inspire.identity. PLATINUM, Ajax, Other
23 articles 8 photos 96 comments

The shadows are coming,
creeping in from behind.
They'll consume me, i know.
As if i needed to remind.


The author's comments:
for those times when you feel like there is no escape.

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on Aug. 17 2010 at 2:04 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Papillion, Nebraska
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Favorite Quote:
What the front door.

i really like this one. those 4 lines were just awesome.

on Jul. 15 2010 at 11:18 am
inspire.identity. PLATINUM, Ajax, Other
23 articles 8 photos 96 comments

thank you soo much ; 

and yes i know, i just couldn't get it to rhyme :$ :P 


on Jul. 7 2010 at 6:23 pm
TheRealAriel1995 PLATINUM, Highland Village, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;See in what peace a Christian can die.&quot; - Joseph Addison<br /> &quot;How come everyone will come to your funeral, but nobody will come see you when you are living?&quot;

good job!!! love it, it has such emotion. the only thing i hav to critique is that u said " As if i needed to remind". i know the only way to rhyme was to keep it like that but just thought i wud point it out it shud be reminded. but as i said it was still good!!!! :)

on Jun. 10 2010 at 9:10 am
inspire.identity. PLATINUM, Ajax, Other
23 articles 8 photos 96 comments
Thanks ! :D

on Jun. 9 2010 at 6:43 pm
Alice_in_Wonderland GOLD, San Clemente, California
16 articles 0 photos 620 comments

Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;I could give up, I could stay stuck, or I could move on, So I put one foot front of the other, No no no nothing&rsquo;s gonna break my stride, &ldquo; &ndash;David Archuleta (The Other Side of Down)

Wow! great job!