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No need to remind me

May 14, 2010
By inspire.identity. PLATINUM, Ajax, Other
inspire.identity. PLATINUM, Ajax, Other
23 articles 8 photos 96 comments

The shadows are coming,
creeping in from behind.
They'll consume me, i know.
As if i needed to remind.


The author's comments:
for those times when you feel like there is no escape.

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on Aug. 17 2010 at 2:04 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Papillion, Nebraska
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Favorite Quote:
What the front door.

i really like this one. those 4 lines were just awesome.

on Jul. 15 2010 at 11:18 am
inspire.identity. PLATINUM, Ajax, Other
23 articles 8 photos 96 comments

thank you soo much ; 

and yes i know, i just couldn't get it to rhyme :$ :P 


on Jul. 7 2010 at 6:23 pm
TheRealAriel1995 PLATINUM, Highland Village, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"See in what peace a Christian can die." - Joseph Addison
"How come everyone will come to your funeral, but nobody will come see you when you are living?"

good job!!! love it, it has such emotion. the only thing i hav to critique is that u said " As if i needed to remind". i know the only way to rhyme was to keep it like that but just thought i wud point it out it shud be reminded. but as i said it was still good!!!! :)

on Jun. 10 2010 at 9:10 am
inspire.identity. PLATINUM, Ajax, Other
23 articles 8 photos 96 comments
Thanks ! :D

on Jun. 9 2010 at 6:43 pm
Alice_in_Wonderland GOLD, San Clemente, California
16 articles 0 photos 620 comments

Favorite Quote:
“I could give up, I could stay stuck, or I could move on, So I put one foot front of the other, No no no nothing’s gonna break my stride, “ –David Archuleta (The Other Side of Down)

Wow! great job!