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No need to remind me

May 14, 2010
By inspire.identity. PLATINUM, Ajax, Other
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The shadows are coming,
creeping in from behind.
They'll consume me, i know.
As if i needed to remind.

© Sarah S., Marblehead, MA

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for those times when you feel like there is no escape.
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Boosflash DIAMOND said...
on Aug. 17 2010 at 2:04 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Papillion, Nebraska
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What the front door.

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i really like this one. those 4 lines were just awesome.
inspire.identity. PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 15 2010 at 11:18 am
inspire.identity. PLATINUM, Ajax, Other
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thank you soo much ; 

and yes i know, i just couldn't get it to rhyme :$ :P 

TheRealAriel1995 PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 7 2010 at 6:23 pm
TheRealAriel1995 PLATINUM, Highland Village, Texas
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good job!!! love it, it has such emotion. the only thing i hav to critique is that u said " As if i needed to remind". i know the only way to rhyme was to keep it like that but just thought i wud point it out it shud be reminded. but as i said it was still good!!!! :)
inspire.identity. PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 10 2010 at 9:10 am
inspire.identity. PLATINUM, Ajax, Other
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Thanks ! :D
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Wow! great job!