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Begin to Break

September 26, 2011
By AlyssaFama SILVER, Kunkletown, Pennsylvania
AlyssaFama SILVER, Kunkletown, Pennsylvania
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Most people want to be the sun that brightens your day. I'd rather be the moon that shines down on you in your darkest hour.


In the dead of night, I awake,
I feel my heart begin to ache.
Was it a dream or is this real?
All this pain that I feel.
I look to the side where you are gone,
All the rights that were wrong.
A tear begins to slide down my cheek,
Are all other girls always this weak?
I remember your touch; your warm embrace,
How you're gone without a trace.
I gasp for air I held inside,
You'll never know how my soul had died.
In this cold, dark room, I look around,
You were gone without a sound.
You had left without a word,
But a million whispers could be heard.
I watched you leave without a glance behind,
Not a bit of sorrow would I find.
I watched slowly as the door had closed,
All the wounds that are now exposed.
I felt like I was bleeding from the inside out,
You are what I am without.
In the dead of night, I awake,
I can feel my heart begin to break.
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The author's comments:
This is a piece that I wrote when I was going through a rough loss of someone very close to me. I can imagine this is how a lot of people would feel when losing someone they loved.

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on Oct. 13 2011 at 6:00 pm
JoPepper PLATINUM, Annandale, Virginia
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&quot;Freedom is the ability to not care what the other person thinks.&quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;Not all those who wander are lost&quot; --JRR Tolkien<br /> <br /> &quot;When you are listening to music it is better to cover your eyes than your ears.&quot; --Jose&#039; Bergamin

You're welcome!!!! :D

on Oct. 10 2011 at 4:45 pm
AlyssaFama SILVER, Kunkletown, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
Most people want to be the sun that brightens your day. I&#039;d rather be the moon that shines down on you in your darkest hour.

thank you so much!

on Oct. 10 2011 at 2:35 pm
JoPepper PLATINUM, Annandale, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Freedom is the ability to not care what the other person thinks.&quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;Not all those who wander are lost&quot; --JRR Tolkien<br /> <br /> &quot;When you are listening to music it is better to cover your eyes than your ears.&quot; --Jose&#039; Bergamin

This was fantastic it flowed perfectly!!! :)