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I Bet You My Heart

March 6, 2013
By MariahPotter PLATINUM, Lansing, Michigan
MariahPotter PLATINUM, Lansing, Michigan
39 articles 8 photos 74 comments

Favorite Quote:
“We dream in our waking moments, and walk in our sleep.” -scarlett letter


You've prestiged, my love,
To commander in chief,
You've protected my heart like a soldier at war,
In tears I've never found you in my grief,
And you've carried my weight when my soul became sore,

I am forever in your debt,
For this smile on my face is all thanks to you,
My love, to repay, I'll make you a bet,
A bet I plan to pursue,

I bet you my heart we will be forever,
Look in my eyes and understand,
Forever and ever, we'll last together,
I will never let go of your hand,

Your blue innocent eyes are so specious,
But your chest is my faithful protection,
And your humor tis rather facetious,
But your led me the right direction

Amour, in my eyes, I see no wrong,
My dear, your worth all my strongest fantasies,
You fill my ears with your lullaby song,
Though your wild, your calm and appease,

So I accept my bet,
If I lose, I'll lose your heart,
But my bet of eternal togetherness,
Shall not let us ever part.


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on Mar. 27 2013 at 10:01 pm
HopethroughFaithInGod BRONZE, Perry, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"For every action there is an equal and opposite reaction" - Issac Newton (i think?)

Your poem really speaks to  my heart.... your a great poet!

on Mar. 11 2013 at 6:15 pm
MariahPotter PLATINUM, Lansing, Michigan
39 articles 8 photos 74 comments

Favorite Quote:
“We dream in our waking moments, and walk in our sleep.” -scarlett letter

I'm glad I could do that for you, it cheers me up when I read it too being it's based on a real event in my life.  Thank you for the comment and your welcome :)

on Mar. 11 2013 at 2:38 pm
Rebel21 PLATINUM, St. Catharines, Other
20 articles 0 photos 73 comments

Favorite Quote:
Where there is desire, there is gonna be a flame,<br /> Where there is a flame someone&#039;s bound to get burned.<br /> Just because it burns doesn&#039;t mean you&#039;re gonna die,<br /> You&#039;ve got to get up and try.

This is so beautiful. It makes me so happy to finally read a poem that cheers me up. Thank you.