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Editor's Choice

December 2, 2013
By Mushroom SILVER, Skagway, Alaska
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Mushroom SILVER, Skagway, Alaska
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Favorite Quote:
"If everyone is thinking alike, someone isn't thinking."
- General George Patton Jr

"If God is for us, who can be against us?"
-Romans 8:31

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I'd like an Editor's Choice,
I'd feel like I got a Rolls Royce,
But I'd be so sad,
Oh I'd feel so bad,
If I didn't get that choice.

© Krista S., Newport Coast, CA

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ImAKeeper SILVER said...
on Jan. 3 2014 at 11:23 pm
ImAKeeper SILVER, Missouri City, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"I am the master of my fate. I am the captain of my soul."- William Ernest Henley

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Hahahahaha! That just made my day! Thanks for giving me a good laugh! (:
Mushroom SILVER said...
on Dec. 9 2013 at 12:22 pm
Mushroom SILVER, Skagway, Alaska
7 articles 1 photo 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If everyone is thinking alike, someone isn't thinking."
- General George Patton Jr

"If God is for us, who can be against us?"
-Romans 8:31

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This was intended as a humerous limerick.  Definitley not a descriptional piece.  I believe your aspects of humor oppose my own.
Honour SILVER said...
on Dec. 9 2013 at 11:58 am
Honour SILVER, New London, Connecticut
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Favorite Quote:
Greater love has no man than this, that a man lay down his life for his friends. ~John 15:13

"Give me liberty or give me death!" ~Patrick Henry

Be brave and steadfast; have no fear or dread of them, for it is the Lord, your God, who marches with you; he will never fail you or forsake you. ~ Deuteronomy 31:6

"I prefer dangerous freedom over peaceful slavery" ~ Thomas Jefferson

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This is really whineya dn desperate.  It seems like a small child wrote it.   I suggest using more imagry and less begging.  try describing and object instead of pleading to the editors humorous side.   You do have the idea of what a limerick is though and it has a beat.