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Bleed [A Song]

July 7, 2009
By KassyElizabeth DIAMOND, Argyle, New York
KassyElizabeth DIAMOND, Argyle, New York
65 articles 14 photos 30 comments

Just Let Go.

Did you see me?
Did you see me cry?
Will you watch me?
Will you watch me die?

LET GO.

Did you love me?
Or was it a lie?
Did you need me?
Or was I just a good time?

Well Now.
We’ll find out.
I stand here.
Split Open.
Tears Streaming.
Blood Flowing.



BLEED.
BLEED.
JUST BLEED.
ILL BLEED.
COME ON COME ON,
DO YOU LOVE ME?

As I,
BLEED.
Will you just watch
ME?
Will you walk
AWAY.
Or will you stop the
FLOW?
Darlin’ will you
STAY?

AS I BLEED.




Blood.
Crimson red.
Color of roses.
Color of death.

Hold me or let me go?
No more games,
Ive got to
KNOW.

Come on Come on.
You gonna stop the flow?
Come on Come on.
Let me know.
Don’t have much time.
Tell me please,
Before I die.

Wont you hold me close?

As I
BLEED.
I cant
BREATHE.
As I
BLEED.
So,
PLEASE.
As I,
BLEED.

Don’t Leave Me In The Dark…
LET GO.


The author's comments:
Once Again, this is a song...so it may be written to indicate how some parts wound be sung...such as the word in all caps , they would be screamed rather than sang.

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NoName1769 said...
on Mar. 26 at 12:00 pm
NoName1769, Arlington, Texas
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love this song, keep making songs like this!

on Jan. 17 at 11:19 pm
Luka_Roi BRONZE, Edmond, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
"Stand up for what you believe in. Even if it means standing alone." - Andrew Dennis Biersack

I know how you feel, I've felt this way before when my boyfriend lied to me for months and then left me.

on Dec. 6 2020 at 9:04 pm
Mean_Beauty4768 BRONZE, Lincoln, Nebraska
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Favorite Quote:
“You can't start the next chapter of your life if you keep re-reading the last one.”

― Michael McMillian

I'm looking for a song for my website called Life's a Song, So Sing It. If any of you could write me one, and the best one I like will get a shout you out on my Socials.

hanna4868 said...
on Sep. 17 2020 at 2:11 pm
hanna4868, Lancaster, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"Maybe okay will be our always" gus from the fault in our stars.

i love it. please make this into a song!!!

newteenboi said...
on Aug. 21 2020 at 10:36 am
newteenboi, Moore, Oklahoma
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THIS WAS GREAT!!!! It really stirred up emotion and I loved it!!!

annabanana03 said...
on Jul. 21 2020 at 10:44 pm
annabanana03, Collins, Mississippi
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Well written! It was filled with emotion and power. Very deep. I loved it. Keep it up!

lea_f910 said...
on May. 30 2020 at 12:11 am
lea_f910, Honesdale, Pennsylvania
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this was a beautiful poem and it would be an amazing song

on Mar. 9 2020 at 9:39 am
KatelynnNicole, Middleburg, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
'Never love anyone who treats you like your ordinary.'






















-Oscar Wilde

I agree with @Armando, these lyrics really reached out, and it would be a great song.

_Armando said...
on Dec. 19 2019 at 1:37 pm
_Armando, Sacramento, California
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Yo this hit me it was very good and you should make it into a actual song

on Dec. 19 2019 at 1:32 pm
claudia-padilla, Sacramento, California
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I like the emotion in your song. I think this is very powerful.

on Dec. 13 2019 at 11:52 am
Goku_Nativeson, Ogema, Minnesota
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Tour very good

jmeeks said...
on Dec. 3 2019 at 2:41 pm
jmeeks, North Charleston, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
This is like the calm after the storm, everything has settled and even though it left destruction in it's wake, you know the worst is over.

this is very powerful, you are a talented writer.

on Sep. 29 2019 at 8:18 pm
dashbabylittle, Fort Mcmurray, Alberta
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Favorite Quote:
"Effort makes you. You will regret someday if you don’t do your best now. Don’t think it’s too late but keep working on it. It takes time, but there’s nothing that gets worse due to practicing. So practice. You may get depressed, but it’s evidence that you are doing good."

"Living without passion is like being dead."

-Jungkook

this is really bad and horrible. plz dont do this...just STOP! it scared me

on Jul. 20 2019 at 5:50 pm
alaskanbeelover BRONZE, Palmer, Louisiana
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Favorite Quote:
"You must breathe to live, but blink and you will miss it all." - me

What genre is this song supposed to be?
The vibe I'm getting is a mix between Billie Eilish and TØP.

kim2004 BRONZE said...
on Apr. 16 2019 at 10:42 am
kim2004 BRONZE, Springboro, Pennsylvania
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I love the emotion in the poem and how esally people can relate to it and it also really makes you think and i think its a beautiful symbol of of how teens feel

on Apr. 3 2019 at 9:00 am
Xx_KodaWolf_xX, Winston-Salem, North Carolina
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I love the emotion put into this! You must've really thought about it to make it this powerful. I would love to see it published and put on Spotify or something. Definitely worth the views.

on Mar. 26 2019 at 2:06 pm
kpipsforme_11, Seoul, Other
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she must have gone through a breakup and turned into an emo/goth person who cuts their self to 'release the pain'

aivey19 BRONZE said...
on Feb. 5 2019 at 1:38 pm
aivey19 BRONZE, Greenwood, Arkansas
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It really made me feeling something, and to me that is the whole purpose of poetry! Good Job!

on Jan. 24 2019 at 9:34 am
liamobuach BRONZE, Congers, New York
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the tone is so irregular and it doesn't flow :(

on Jan. 24 2019 at 9:16 am
liamobuach BRONZE, Congers, New York
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@MXRNXN i guess they never miss, huh.