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Bleed [A Song]

July 7, 2009
By KassyElizabeth DIAMOND, Argyle, New York
KassyElizabeth DIAMOND, Argyle, New York
65 articles 14 photos 30 comments

Just Let Go.

Did you see me?
Did you see me cry?
Will you watch me?
Will you watch me die?

LET GO.

Did you love me?
Or was it a lie?
Did you need me?
Or was I just a good time?

Well Now.
We’ll find out.
I stand here.
Split Open.
Tears Streaming.
Blood Flowing.



BLEED.
BLEED.
JUST BLEED.
ILL BLEED.
COME ON COME ON,
DO YOU LOVE ME?

As I,
BLEED.
Will you just watch
ME?
Will you walk
AWAY.
Or will you stop the
FLOW?
Darlin’ will you
STAY?

AS I BLEED.




Blood.
Crimson red.
Color of roses.
Color of death.

Hold me or let me go?
No more games,
Ive got to
KNOW.

Come on Come on.
You gonna stop the flow?
Come on Come on.
Let me know.
Don’t have much time.
Tell me please,
Before I die.

Wont you hold me close?

As I
BLEED.
I cant
BREATHE.
As I
BLEED.
So,
PLEASE.
As I,
BLEED.

Don’t Leave Me In The Dark…
LET GO.


The author's comments:
Once Again, this is a song...so it may be written to indicate how some parts wound be sung...such as the word in all caps , they would be screamed rather than sang.

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LoveKills GOLD said...
on Jun. 10 2010 at 4:49 pm
LoveKills GOLD, Niantic, Connecticut
14 articles 0 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
And people say we wear tight jeans and dye our hair. That doesnt mean we can't scream or make loud noise.

im at a lost for words when i read this. its just a wow song. in a great way

on May. 5 2010 at 8:23 am
FateshiddenWriter GOLD, Williamsburg, Virginia
16 articles 0 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
if i were the rain could i ever merge with someones heart like the way rain merges with the sky and earth- BLEAH QUOTE

i love it!!

i can relate to it

 

=]


on Apr. 19 2010 at 9:04 pm
darkdestro27 PLATINUM, West Jefferson, Ohio
21 articles 0 photos 57 comments

Favorite Quote:
hey whats up how are you ........... squirrel

this is amazing never thought i would say this but i feel jelouse of your talent

on Apr. 15 2010 at 8:54 pm
KassyElizabeth DIAMOND, Argyle, New York
65 articles 14 photos 30 comments
No, I just sing. lol.

Meli138 said...
on Apr. 15 2010 at 7:40 pm
Meli138, GP, Texas
0 articles 0 photos 56 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Like a bird with broken wings its not how high he flies but the song he sings"
"Everybody live like its the last day you will ever see tell me tell me do you feel the pressure now?"

Lol glad to hear that! Its an awesome song! :)

on Apr. 15 2010 at 3:36 pm
curlikap18 BRONZE, Newark, Delaware
2 articles 0 photos 14 comments
oh. well thats okay too! Are you like a musician, like do you play anything?

on Apr. 15 2010 at 10:28 am
KassyElizabeth DIAMOND, Argyle, New York
65 articles 14 photos 30 comments
Thank You. It definitely helps me not worry about those other comments. lol

on Apr. 15 2010 at 10:27 am
KassyElizabeth DIAMOND, Argyle, New York
65 articles 14 photos 30 comments
I would just like to say, because of your comment, Watch Me Bleed by Scary Kids Scaring Kids is now one of my favorite songs. However it is alot slower than this one, and I must admit much more beautiful.

on Apr. 15 2010 at 10:25 am
KassyElizabeth DIAMOND, Argyle, New York
65 articles 14 photos 30 comments
probably never. sorry.lol

on Apr. 15 2010 at 10:23 am
KassyElizabeth DIAMOND, Argyle, New York
65 articles 14 photos 30 comments
Uhm well It already has a tune...I just don't know how to write music so...

on Apr. 15 2010 at 10:22 am
KassyElizabeth DIAMOND, Argyle, New York
65 articles 14 photos 30 comments
Was there a point to any of that?

on Apr. 15 2010 at 10:22 am
KassyElizabeth DIAMOND, Argyle, New York
65 articles 14 photos 30 comments
It does already have a tune...

on Apr. 13 2010 at 7:45 pm
WonderDreamer23 BRONZE, Maplewood, Minnesota
1 article 0 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
Shut Up and Live I am the most sexiest thing that happened to you and i know you know it.

i love it it's abosutly great check it out! WOW can i give it some music make it real big?

on Apr. 13 2010 at 7:21 pm
criminalninja<33 SILVER, Hidalgo, Texas
9 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
"things are only as beautiful as u percieve them"

bambambam

what's that?

excellency :)


yorf said...
on Apr. 13 2010 at 3:28 pm
actually. don't BLEEEEEEED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! yourself.

yorf said...
on Apr. 13 2010 at 3:22 pm
BLEEEEEDDDDD!!!!!!!! yourself

yorf said...
on Apr. 13 2010 at 3:10 pm
BLEEEEEED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Yalith BRONZE said...
on Apr. 13 2010 at 8:39 am
Yalith BRONZE, Ottumwa, Iowa
2 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Love is a lie; I trust hate."

"The pain of having a broken heart is not so much as to kill you, yet not so little as to let you live."

"You don’t realize how much you care about someone until they don’t care about you."

i love this song. i was wondering if i could print it out and give it a tune.

on Apr. 10 2010 at 10:46 pm
emo_nerd951 BRONZE, Clover, South Carolina
3 articles 5 photos 39 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Always be kind, for everyone is fighting a hard battle." -unknown

This is really good!!! Like no joke. I am like dead serious. Keep up the good work!!!

on Mar. 28 2010 at 11:01 am
curlikap18 BRONZE, Newark, Delaware
2 articles 0 photos 14 comments
really love it! I want to hear it. so when its on youtube....