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With Me

September 5, 2009
By Kaila (: BRONZE, Goodyear, Arizona
Kaila (: BRONZE, Goodyear, Arizona
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Your sitting there,
with a smile that won't leave your face.
Your LOLing,
then just relax and say.

You are, the only one for me,
we would, love for eternity,
and I can't even see you cry,
without wishing you were mine.
you live, a battlefield of love,
dodging, bullets made of doves,
oh for goodness sake,
you are the one for me.

i really don't know what to say,
you've left me speechless and I just come over and sit.
but then I think of it and say,

I wish you were mine,
we'd chill all the time,
i'd love you forever till the end of life.
we'd sit together,and just hold hands.
i wish you were mine.

I love you,
and now your mine.

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riley.lang11 said...
on Jun. 16 2015 at 1:23 pm
riley.lang11, Acworth, Georgia
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Wow this is awesome! I'm checking out your other pieces.

on May. 15 2011 at 1:38 am
nutsongirl23 SILVER, Wausau, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
"You don't need to give reasons for the things you do. Sometimes you just have to do what you want. And sometime what's messed up to everyone else is what's right for you. You have to do it and not be afraid of it."-Kristen Stewart

I Love it! It's so cute and touching. I wish it was a legit song cause I'd be singing it all the time

on Feb. 8 2010 at 7:58 am
EmilyRosiePosie BRONZE, Hancock, Maine
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awwww this is sooooo incredibly cute my eyes are watering it reminds me of me and my bf :))

on Dec. 19 2009 at 4:44 pm
tragicxharmony SILVER, Vicksburg, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
I am waiting; I am wanting; no more fighting; no more bleeding. <3

oh, i really like this song, it's alot like my life now too! keep writing!