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CRAZY!

October 19, 2009
By peach<3 GOLD, Portland, Oregon
peach<3 GOLD, Portland, Oregon
15 articles 7 photos 29 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Growing old is mandatory, growing up is optional."






- Unknown author.


(first person)
My head is spinning
My mind is all around
My heart is winning
I scream without a sound

So turn and look at me!
Can't you see I'm trying?
Why don't you just tell me?
Help me, I am dying!

(second person)
What do I do?
I don't know what to tell you!
Stop this, I'm begging you!
I don't know how to help you!

(first person)
I plan, and plan, and plan
But never act the same.
I am his biggest fan
And yet don't feel no shame.

So turn and look at me!
Can't you see I'm trying?
Why don't you just tell me?
Help me, I am dying!

(second person)
I now know what to do,
But don't know how to tell you!
Help ME, I begging you!
I don't know how to help you!

(both people)
Hiding that I love you.
But it just makes my heart break.
Please tell me what to do!
Help me, oh for Love's sake!


The author's comments:
You should probably know that there is a girl and boy singing this. The girl is the 1st person and the guy is the 2nd.

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peach<3 GOLD said...
on Nov. 23 2009 at 9:17 pm
peach<3 GOLD, Portland, Oregon
15 articles 7 photos 29 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Growing old is mandatory, growing up is optional."






- Unknown author.

Thank U peoples! Is it really that sad that you wuld be teary? :( I tried to make it more happy! :) :D :P :)

Thandiwe GOLD said...
on Nov. 20 2009 at 4:01 pm
Thandiwe GOLD, New York, New York
13 articles 0 photos 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
Just Write It. (follow me on tumblr: thandielove13.tumblr.com)

This is awesome

lindsey said...
on Nov. 20 2009 at 10:29 am
I really like this!! I kinda got teary reading this.. That should tell you something!! VERY GOOD!! Keep it up!!

on Nov. 20 2009 at 7:53 am
Deanna Tocco GOLD, Congers, New York
16 articles 1 photo 31 comments
I like this :)