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Moonlit Tears

November 3, 2009
By BloodForInk SILVER, Pasco, Washington
BloodForInk SILVER, Pasco, Washington
5 articles 3 photos 59 comments

Favorite Quote:
Live life to the fullest, if you don't, you'll wish you had


Dark… and cold,
Winter, grows old
The young…and old,
Grow weary, of stories told.

I wonder, at what happens next.
As I stare at the supposedly blest.
A shadow of truth, comes into her eyes,
As she sees, I see right through her lies.

She begs forgive me, but it’s to late,
Her lies were her demise…

Tonight, the moonlight cries,
Cause yesterday my lover died.
They took her soul,
And her life,
And with it mine.
I ask, don’t mourn for me,
But I again my lover must see.
Don’t come this way,
No don’t follow me.
For tomorrow,
I enter a tomb of shadows

Loss… and pain
It drives me, insane
I… can’t take
Losing you, this way

I wander, this dark day
Look in their eyes and they’ll turn away
No one is, here too stay
They come and then they go away

They scream help me, but it’s too late
Their lies were their demise

Tonight, the moonlight cries,
Cause yesterday my lover died.
They took her soul,
And her life,
And with it mine.
I ask, don’t mourn for me,
But I again my lover must see.
Don’t come this way,
No don’t follow me.
For tomorrow,
I enter a tomb of shadows

Tonight, the moonlight cries,
Cause yesterday my lover died.
They took her soul,
And her life,
And with it mine.
I ask, don’t mourn for me,
But I again my lover must see.
Don’t come this way,
No don’t follow me.
For tomorrow,
I enter a tomb of shadows

Goodbye…



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on May. 3 2010 at 10:57 am
BloodForInk SILVER, Pasco, Washington
5 articles 3 photos 59 comments

Favorite Quote:
Live life to the fullest, if you don't, you'll wish you had

thank you. I love this song. I have alot more I just havent had the time to post them. thanks again this means alot to me

tia94 BRONZE said...
on May. 2 2010 at 5:03 pm
tia94 BRONZE, Pheonix, Arizona
2 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
quiet your heart and listen,close you eyes and dream,open your mind and amagine

hth was amazing.dude i loved it i just cant believe tht it was that well written.you should b very proud of your songs.they r great.check out some of my things too/.

 


on Mar. 3 2010 at 2:29 pm
BloodForInk SILVER, Pasco, Washington
5 articles 3 photos 59 comments

Favorite Quote:
Live life to the fullest, if you don't, you'll wish you had

thank you, I've actually forgotten what I wrote it about because I wrote it so long ago. But thank you, it means a lot to me when ppl like my songs :)

on Feb. 27 2010 at 7:28 pm
a.warren BRONZE, Billings, Montana
1 article 0 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Fear only fear it`s self"

That was vert emonatinal and it was really good

Lonleydandy said...
on Nov. 27 2009 at 11:11 am
yupyup...gah....there it goes again...I couldn't type in just yupyup....haha

on Nov. 27 2009 at 11:08 am
BloodForInk SILVER, Pasco, Washington
5 articles 3 photos 59 comments

Favorite Quote:
Live life to the fullest, if you don't, you'll wish you had

:) I hate the 10 characters thing

Lonleydandy said...
on Nov. 27 2009 at 10:50 am
okay....haha

on Nov. 27 2009 at 10:49 am
BloodForInk SILVER, Pasco, Washington
5 articles 3 photos 59 comments

Favorite Quote:
Live life to the fullest, if you don't, you'll wish you had

cause it sounds funny haha

Lonleydandy said...
on Nov. 26 2009 at 9:13 pm
yah, it does...why do you like rumpelstiltskin

on Nov. 26 2009 at 9:08 pm
BloodForInk SILVER, Pasco, Washington
5 articles 3 photos 59 comments

Favorite Quote:
Live life to the fullest, if you don't, you'll wish you had

yea it sounds funny :)

Lonleydandy said...
on Nov. 26 2009 at 8:03 pm
haha, okay..........hahahaha

on Nov. 26 2009 at 7:30 pm
BloodForInk SILVER, Pasco, Washington
5 articles 3 photos 59 comments

Favorite Quote:
Live life to the fullest, if you don't, you'll wish you had

hahaha yea I guess so. I like Rumpelstiltskin haha

Lonleydandy said...
on Nov. 26 2009 at 7:16 pm
yah...haha, haven't you noticed!? I have it in almost EVERY comment...hahahaha

on Nov. 26 2009 at 6:58 pm
BloodForInk SILVER, Pasco, Washington
5 articles 3 photos 59 comments

Favorite Quote:
Live life to the fullest, if you don't, you'll wish you had

yea it sucks lol. You like the word ha?

Lonleydandy said...
on Nov. 26 2009 at 6:55 pm
Yah, I dont' find myself very patient, and I submitted this one poem over a month ago...hahaha [i like the word ha]...hahaha

on Nov. 26 2009 at 6:35 pm
BloodForInk SILVER, Pasco, Washington
5 articles 3 photos 59 comments

Favorite Quote:
Live life to the fullest, if you don't, you'll wish you had

yea I hate waiting lol. Thats cool, I like having my friends read what I write. I enjoy their feedback

Lonleydandy said...
on Nov. 26 2009 at 5:29 pm
That's cool. So am I..haha, and I'm waiting on a friend to critique another before I put it up.

on Nov. 26 2009 at 1:55 pm
BloodForInk SILVER, Pasco, Washington
5 articles 3 photos 59 comments

Favorite Quote:
Live life to the fullest, if you don't, you'll wish you had

well I'm waiting for one to be approved

Lonleydandy said...
on Nov. 26 2009 at 10:40 am
You should, I'd read them..hahaha

on Nov. 26 2009 at 10:30 am
BloodForInk SILVER, Pasco, Washington
5 articles 3 photos 59 comments

Favorite Quote:
Live life to the fullest, if you don't, you'll wish you had

that's cool. I have alot more poems but I haven't put them on yet