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You Told me you cared.

February 21, 2010
By FaithSnyder16 ELITE, Metamora, Ohio
FaithSnyder16 ELITE, Metamora, Ohio
180 articles 8 photos 97 comments

Favorite Quote:
Write what you know, and dream of. - Jane Austen
People throw rocks at things that shine - Taylor Swift
Just Keep Swimming! Just Keep Swimming! - Ellen DeGengeres as Dory


The ripples in the water,
are caused by my tears,
because you told me I didn' t matter,
the worst of my fears.

You told me you didn't love me,
you told me all lies,
you told me I was crazy,
And said your goodbyes.

You told your friends I cry,
You told them I begged,
You told them I would die,
Without you in my head.

You told your family it didn't work out,
I told my family you didn't want to try,
I know you didn't care, without a doubt,
So there's no use, to sit here and cry,

A new boy will come,
Someone who cares,
And he wont be as dumb,
To let go, he wouldn't dare.


The author's comments:
Boys are.... dumb... don't get heartbroken over some guy that's not worth it, just tell yourself it wasn't meant to be and go find that other hot fish swimmin' in the sea. :P

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on Mar. 4 2010 at 5:12 pm
FaithSnyder16 ELITE, Metamora, Ohio
180 articles 8 photos 97 comments

Favorite Quote:
Write what you know, and dream of. - Jane Austen
People throw rocks at things that shine - Taylor Swift
Just Keep Swimming! Just Keep Swimming! - Ellen DeGengeres as Dory

I've had to tell myself this a few times unfortunatly... lol... I definantly will go check out your work! I'm so glad you read mine! I hope you find that one guy for you! :)

lph13 PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 1 2010 at 9:51 am
lph13 PLATINUM, Enid, Oklahoma
34 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Life is one big road with lots of signs. So when you riding through the ruts, don't complicate your mind. Flee from hate, mischief and jealousy. Don't bury your thoughts, put your vision to reality . Wake Up and Live!” Bob Marley

dang this actually reminds me of me cuz of all the love or wateva its was called that ive been through and i thought none of them actually cared but ne way that advice is good i shud take it cuz that wat everyone needs to do well hey you should comment on some of my poems their pretty good but i want your opion