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What It's Like To Feel

November 20, 2010
By aphilly DIAMOND, St. Paul Park, Minnesota
aphilly DIAMOND, St. Paul Park, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
"Have you ever once in your life reached out to touch infinity?" -Ellen Hopkins


I drew a circle around my heart
to remember where it's supposed to be
I don't know what's wrong
but I know I'm not okay
I'm lost

*chorus:
Someone come and find me
and set me free
I need a hand to hold
cuz it's startin' to grow cold
come break these chains of steel
and show me what it's like to feel

I stare at the sky
and wonder what it's like to love
the wind blows around me
but I stay still
I'm frozen

*chorus*
show me, oh come show me

I stare at the people walking
and wonder what it's like to have a home
like them, like you
but I can't because I'm me

*chorus*

Drew a circle around my heart
come find me
set me free
oh, oh

*chorus*
what it's like to feel
oh, what it's like to feel
what's it like to feel?


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on Dec. 10 2010 at 2:27 pm
LiviRose93 SILVER, Fort Plain, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"Love is like the wind, you can't see it, but you can always feel it." ~ A Walk to Remember

ohh great thanks, im not good with exact notes but maybe if i came up with something ill post it on youtube and credit you in and ill tellyou which it is so you can view it..idk haha whatever works

on Dec. 8 2010 at 10:24 pm
aphilly DIAMOND, St. Paul Park, Minnesota
63 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Have you ever once in your life reached out to touch infinity?" -Ellen Hopkins

I sort of have a melody but I always struggle with the musical aspect of this so sure go ahead. It would be cool if I could see what you had in mind

on Dec. 8 2010 at 2:51 pm
LiviRose93 SILVER, Fort Plain, New York
7 articles 0 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Love is like the wind, you can't see it, but you can always feel it." ~ A Walk to Remember

Amazing! Im also a song writer, is this is any form of music yet? If it isnt...would you mind if i messed around with its to really make it a song? i love the lyrics and as i was reading them i kinda hand an idea in my head of a way to sing it :D if you could comment back :)

-Livi <3