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Singing a Song of Bliss

November 22, 2010
By redhairCat PLATINUM, Pebble Beach, California
redhairCat PLATINUM, Pebble Beach, California
47 articles 20 photos 411 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I can do anything!"


Sadness may reign

but we'll get through the day

singing a song together


The tune is bright

and we know it's alright

to let it go on forever


Sadness will stay and then go away

But the sun always shines in the darkest of times

It never goes amiss


So I'll teach you a verse

that will brighten the worst

called "Singing a Song of Bliss"


The rain may fall

but we'll have a ball

even with the bad weather


The clouds will part

as we open hearts

singing a song together


The sun will come out as we're singing about

and the birds will chime in to our wonderful hymn

Happiness is our wish


We'll have a great time

with this wonderful rhyme

called "Singing a Song of Bliss"


The music will show

the love that we know

from making the world better


Joy is brought to the day

in our simple way

of singing a song together


We'll see the sun's golden rays as we finish our phrase

The music is done and it's brought lots of fun

We're grateful for this


So whenever you're blue

sing the song I taught you

called "Singing a Song of Bliss"


The author's comments:
I wrote this song for my cousin's baby. It's sort of a lullaby/ song for inspiration type of piece. My main reason for writing this was to show that even when things don't go the way you want them to, you have to find the good in things.

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Emily.L GOLD said...
on Aug. 2 2011 at 11:57 am
Emily.L GOLD, Gilbert, Arizona
10 articles 12 photos 84 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes, we just have to be happy with what people can offer us. Even if it's not what we want, at least it's something. " -Sarah Dessen

I loved the ending, and the poem itself :) Very nice

julian GOLD said...
on Jul. 21 2011 at 11:04 am
julian GOLD, Eugene, Oregon
17 articles 17 photos 223 comments

Favorite Quote:
The goal is not about living forever, the goal is about creating something that can.

Beautiful work! You really have some talent! I like the way that you set up the rhythm throughout this piece. It's wonderful!

on Jul. 10 2011 at 11:17 pm
redhairCat PLATINUM, Pebble Beach, California
47 articles 20 photos 411 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I can do anything!"

New work of mine just got posted. Please check it out! Thanks!

torivix SILVER said...
on Jun. 4 2011 at 4:09 pm
torivix SILVER, McLean, Virginia
7 articles 8 photos 2 comments
i love this! its really inspiring and relatebale! keep writing!! (:

The Gardener said...
on Apr. 5 2011 at 2:21 pm

This is so true !

These words inspired me!

Thanks Redhair Cat