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Headed for Heartbreak

November 27, 2010
By Bnubbs PLATINUM, Goshen, Kentucky
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Bnubbs PLATINUM, Goshen, Kentucky
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Let it be! All you need is love!

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We started out so perfect,
but we started out to fast.
We thought we were in love,
but we couldn't make it last.

We thought we'd last forever,
that's what you said to me.
"We'll always be together."
HaHa boy your funny!

We'd always say we loved each other,
We'd hold hands ALL the time.
I didn't want to find another.
We were the perfect rhyme.

We were the perfect match,
why did you have to go?
You got me so attached,
I'm beggining to run on low.

I told you that i loved you,
and i never tell a lie,
You said you loved me too,
but why'd you say goodbye?

© Brianna D., Everson, WA

The author's comments:
recently my boyfriend and I broke up. we thought we'd last forever. he told me so himself, that we'd be together for a really long time. but he lied. we would do everything together and we'd always hug and hold hands and say i love you etc etc. i thought it was perfect. like i was in heaven. but he broke my heart and this is just saying how we started out "fast" and said I love you too soon and... well we were heading for heartbreak rigth from the beggining.
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Bnubbs PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 16 2010 at 6:59 pm
Bnubbs PLATINUM, Goshen, Kentucky
21 articles 6 photos 22 comments

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Let it be! All you need is love!

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thank you! no one really tells me how good i am. actually a few times ive heard it but only from my bff. and its ok bout the brake up thing but he just said like last night that he still likes me lol. goodness.. boys.
NervousBreakdown BRONZE said...
on Dec. 16 2010 at 6:39 pm
NervousBreakdown BRONZE, Summerlin, Nevada
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Perfection is simply just an illusion

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i loved it... i can really relate....

keep writing, ur really good..

:)

 

 

:(srry bout u and ur ex and the brake up