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Devil In Disguise

July 8, 2011
By Silent_Artist SILVER, Selma, North Carolina
Silent_Artist SILVER, Selma, North Carolina
8 articles 0 photos 24 comments

Favorite Quote:
"One day I'm gonna run away and never come back and when I come back I'm gonna be the knife master" - Jimmy The Rev Sullivan. Not much of a deep meaning but it makes me laugh.


Verse 1
She's a red horned angel,
that wants your love and desire.
She's a speeding bullet,
got you in the crossfire.
It feels so right,
but you know it's so wrong.
You'll fall in her game,
and she'll string you along.

Chorus
You've fallen into her web,
now do as you're told.
She fills you with promises,
of growing old.
It's in that moment you realize,
she's a devil in disguise.

Verse 2
You're needing her now,
so give her that call.
She won't help you,
grab you when you fall.
She's like a horrible disease,
always burning on your mind.
You're begging for help,
but helps so hard to find.
She's had her fun,
left you so upset.
Except your fate,
you've now become her pet.

Chorus
You've fallen into her web,
now do as you're told.
She fills you with promises,
of growing old.
It's in that moment you realize,
she's a devil in disguise.

Bridge
Now she's got you on your knee's
begging for mercy.
You're under her command,
for all eternity.
You know the choice you made,
now there's no time to dwell.
So grab her by the hand,
and she'll drag you down to he**.

Chorus
You've fallen into her web,
now do as you're told.
She fills you with promises,
of growing old.
It's in that moment you realize,
she's a devil in disguise.


The author's comments:
My second song writing attempt. My first song got very good reception and I had fun writing this one as well

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Poetry-Angel said...
on Nov. 19 2011 at 7:08 pm
Poetry-Angel, Baxter, Minnesota
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can my band use this please haha it is cool it you say no we are working on the first song and yea we hope you like that one but pleeeeaaaasssseee :)

Kai17 GOLD said...
on Jul. 27 2011 at 10:36 am
Kai17 GOLD, Spokane, Washington
17 articles 5 photos 340 comments

Favorite Quote:
*beepbeep*
"Where to, Miss?"
"To the stars."

Very cool imagery. The overall poem was good, and the mood was very light. Good job!

on Jul. 18 2011 at 9:51 am
AllysonMarie GOLD, Gardner, Massachusetts
12 articles 25 photos 43 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Only an Aunt can give hugs like a mother, can keep secrets like a sister, and share love like a friend.”

This is amazing! I love it.

on Jul. 16 2011 at 1:50 pm
StrangeJade PLATINUM, Relative Obscurity, California
36 articles 17 photos 391 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life is so beautiful that death has fallen in love with it." - Life of Pi

This is really good, just like all your other stuff. :) Although it is beyond idiotic that the editors censored out "he.ll." Really, TeenInk? Really?