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Rejection with a black rose

June 22, 2011
By Niarra_Nightmare SILVER, Popular Grove, Arkansas
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Niarra_Nightmare SILVER, Popular Grove, Arkansas
8 articles 0 photos 24 comments

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"The time is here, the end is near,the lonliness I always fear presents itself and like a giant wave it crashes into me without warning. Washing me into the dark and lonely existence I always knew was coming."

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Rejection can kill you
So why aren't I dead?
I stare at the ceiling and
bleed in my bed.
Rejection can kill you
so why am I here?
Still breathing and crying
my hot blooded tears
Rejection can kill you
so can deception and lies
Maybe, could it be,
I see things though her eyes
NOW!
I know I've been wrong
so very long
as I bleed out this lyrics
from my hurt, girl I wrote you a song
NOW!
I am here to make wrongs right
so to keep our love strong
I will stand up and fight.

© Molly H., Lynden, WA

The author's comments:
My girlfriend and I were going through a rough patch the day I wrote this. I was angry, sad, and confused and well I came up with this.
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Niarra_Nightmare SILVER said...
on Sep. 4 2011 at 9:13 pm
Niarra_Nightmare SILVER, Popular Grove, Arkansas
8 articles 0 photos 24 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The time is here, the end is near,the lonliness I always fear presents itself and like a giant wave it crashes into me without warning. Washing me into the dark and lonely existence I always knew was coming.&quot;

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Will do! Thanks follow poet.
dia.dreamer GOLD said...
on Aug. 20 2011 at 2:40 pm
dia.dreamer GOLD, Kochi, Other
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&quot;I saw an angel in the marble and carved until I set him free.&quot; - Michelangelo<br /> &quot;I took a deep breath and listened to the old bray of my heart: I am, I am, I am.&quot; - Sylvia Plath

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This IS amazing. in just a few lines, you showed your feelings so perfectly. love it! check out my poems too. :)
Blue4indigo PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 13 2011 at 5:43 pm
Blue4indigo PLATINUM, Sturbridge, Connecticut
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I&#039;d rather be sorry for something that I did than for something I didn&#039;t do.<br /> -Red Scott

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This. Is. Amazing.
Niarra_Nightmare SILVER said...
on Jul. 27 2011 at 3:23 pm
Niarra_Nightmare SILVER, Popular Grove, Arkansas
8 articles 0 photos 24 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The time is here, the end is near,the lonliness I always fear presents itself and like a giant wave it crashes into me without warning. Washing me into the dark and lonely existence I always knew was coming.&quot;

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As you wish it, so it shall be. Thank you, Lola Black for inspiring me to keep writing.
Lola_Black GOLD said...
on Jul. 26 2011 at 2:45 pm
Lola_Black GOLD, Harrison, Michigan
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&quot;I&#039;ve always been famous. It&#039;s just everybody&#039;s just now finding out.&quot; --Lady Gaga

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The emotion in your writing gives me goosebumps! Keep writing!!!