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Suicide Note

March 2, 2014
By xxMedievalShadexx GOLD, Deerfield Beach, Florida
xxMedievalShadexx GOLD, Deerfield Beach, Florida
17 articles 0 photos 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love is like a friendship caught on fire. In the beginning a flame, very pretty, often hot and fierce, but still only light and flickering. As love grows older, our hearts mature and our love becomes as coals, deep-burning and unquenchable. -Bruce Lee


Verse 1

Baby girl, please don’t cry. Believe me
I know you want to die
I know this pain, it hurts so much
Sometimes you just want to scream “that’s enough”
But look out your window
See a whole new day
Come on girl, just get up(get up)
And walk the rest of the way

Aye boy, put down that pencil
Don’t write a goodbye note
You shouldn’t just let go
Let if flow out the window
Put your shirt sleeves down
And just get out of town
Just please don’t write(don’t write)
A suicide note

Chorus

Please put down that blade
There’s someone who loves you
It doesn’t have to be this way

I love you, please don’t go
You may not know me but I know you
Please put down that note
That suicide note

Oh, oh

Verse 2

Screw all that bullying
They don’t see who you wanna be
Put your chin up high
Point your eyes to the sky
Lift up your head now
Don’t ever be put down
You’re beautiful
Just the way you are



Don’t pick up that knife
Please don’t end your life
I know all that suffering
Is taking a toll on me
I hurt because you hurt
But it should be okay
I know it’s not too late
But put down that note

Chorus

Please put down that blade
There’s someone who loves you
It doesn’t have to be this way

I love you, please don’t go
You may not know me but I know you
Please put down that note
That suicide note

Oh, oh
(X2)

Verse 3

Come here, lemme change your life
Come on(come on), let’s end this strife
I know it’s killing you deep inside
Let’s throw this pain aside
Let a new life grow
Go put on a good show
Don’t throw away your life please
Getting rid of it just won’t appease.

Bridge

Everybody somewhere (everybody somewhere)
People just don’t care (don’t care)
About what we have to say (have to say)

Somebody’s gotta show (gotta show)
The pain we all go through
Throw your hands up in the air, the air, the air



Verse 3 (continued)

Baby girl, please put down that knife
Why do you have to end your life
Don’t listen to what people say
It will just get in the way
Live your life as you please
Just please, please, please for me

All these people cut their wrists
And hope it ends
But it just starts a trend
Don’t be like one of them, ya know
You’re bigger than my love can show

Chorus

Please put down that blade
There’s someone who loves you
It doesn’t have to be this way

I love you, please don’t go
You may not know me but I know you
Please put down that note
That suicide note

Oh, oh

Please put down that blade
There’s someone who loves you
It doesn’t have to be this way

I love you, please don’t go
You may not know me but I know you
Please put down that note
That suicide note

Oh, oh

Please put down that blade
There’s someone who loves you
It doesn’t have to be this way
(ends)


The author's comments:
I'm hoping to turn this into an actual song. I just need a band...

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kman85 said...
on Mar. 11 2014 at 1:39 pm
Wow. That was deep. But it feels like it could be a hit.

Forever SILVER said...
on Mar. 11 2014 at 10:37 am
Forever SILVER, Flint, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;A failure is not always a mistake, it may simply be the best one can do under the circumstances.&quot;<br /> B.F. Skinner

thats so good, amazing