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Its Better to

January 18, 2015
By EttieGH GOLD, Mbabane, Other
EttieGH GOLD, Mbabane, Other
15 articles 2 photos 46 comments

Break your dream into a million pieces,
Because these days it's better to
Work than to dream.

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EttieGH GOLD said...
on Mar. 10 2015 at 2:18 am
EttieGH GOLD, Mbabane, Other
15 articles 2 photos 46 comments
Yeah, actually, after looking at it again, I see that the breaks are in sort of awkward places.

on Mar. 4 2015 at 10:34 pm
Allen. PLATINUM, Palo Alto, California
32 articles 9 photos 525 comments

Favorite Quote:
[i]No matter how much people try to put you down or make you think other things about yourself, the only person you can trust about who you really are is you[/i] -Crusher-P

Very well done! I would have preferred the line breaks in different places, but the idea and execution are very nice.

on Feb. 1 2015 at 11:16 pm
CaseyChickenWang SILVER, McDonough,
7 articles 2 photos 89 comments

Favorite Quote:
"No one likes half-jinglers! Jingle all the way!" - Shelley McNeight
"You don't get what you deserve, you get what you negotiate." - GSUMUN

Omg I know what you mean. So many times our hopes conflict with reality :/ I would love to be a film producer, but producers start off rich enough to produce a movie. I love this poem though and would love to hear it with music