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Disguise

October 20, 2009
By bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)


No one cared to find,
All the hurt behind her eyes.
Everyone thought she was happy,
They were blinded by her lies.
They never saw the pain,
Yet they saw the false perfection.
Secretly she craved love,
All she wanted was simple affection.
Sadly no one showed concern,
As she slipped down the drain.
She just wanted someone to care,
Yet they kept ignoring her pain.
She couldn't live with herself anymore,
So she decided to quit and fail.
One day when she was all alone,
She took a deadly cocktail.
Her friends were all stunned in shock,
It broke her family's heart.
But little did they know,
They could have prevented it from the start.
Everyone thought she had it all,
But that lie only lasted for awhile.
Her disguise no longer worked,
Without her pretty,little smile.



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on Apr. 3 2010 at 2:15 pm
DreamWriter17 PLATINUM, Marengo, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
learn from your past to live for the future.

:) any time

on Apr. 2 2010 at 5:00 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

thank u...ya sadly we all have a mask we choose to hide behind and for most it's our smile..but thank u so much for ur comment!

on Mar. 25 2010 at 7:11 pm
DreamWriter17 PLATINUM, Marengo, Indiana
34 articles 1 photo 682 comments

Favorite Quote:
learn from your past to live for the future.

So sad....and so realistic. Feels familiar too, because I think we all have our "pretty little smiles" we hide behind. Five stars for you, my friend!

on Dec. 17 2009 at 1:22 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

thank you so much:)

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on Dec. 16 2009 at 2:52 pm
this poem is fantastic exxpress real feelings

on Nov. 2 2009 at 4:25 pm
lindseymarie SILVER, Richfield, Minnesota
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I really liked this, it something I can completely relate to, on more than one level.

Keep writing; you have great potential :]

lamzy said...
on Oct. 31 2009 at 8:42 am
lamzy, Depok, Other
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Favorite Quote:
with every difficulty there is relief

wow thats a very great poem. sad but true.. keep up the good work! :)

on Oct. 29 2009 at 11:34 am
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Thanx:) I appreciate the comment;)

Alexx627 said...
on Oct. 28 2009 at 2:35 pm
Alexx627, Moline, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
If you do what you did then you'll get what you got

Awe this is a sad poem:( I almost wanted to cry...but it's vry well written with great flow...keep up the good work:)