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Colors of the Wind

February 15, 2010
By enchanted4yu PLATINUM, Calabasas, California
enchanted4yu PLATINUM, Calabasas, California
24 articles 0 photos 103 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't tell me the sky is the limit when there are footprints on the moon"


Rain cleans the mountains like a new white board
They turn so green and camouflage the trees
I would look at them all day and not be bored
With my hair gently swaying in the breeze

Sunshine is bright and lovely in the sky
Sun is good for playing at the park
Picking flowers outside no more goodbye
I hope it never ever will get dark

Snow gives the chance for creativity
Remember not to eat the yellow kind
Loving the snow angel you made for me
Attack with snow ball fights from the behind

My home has mountains, oceans, and some trees
I love all the possibilities


The author's comments:
I wrote this in my English class and was inspired by all the mystic climates in our world. I find all the different types of weather so magical with endless possibilities. I hope young people will sense the playful tone in my poem but also realize the importance of appreciating the surroundings of mother earth.

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on Mar. 12 2010 at 5:34 pm
enchanted4yu PLATINUM, Calabasas, California
24 articles 0 photos 103 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't tell me the sky is the limit when there are footprints on the moon"

thanks fatty <3

celia<3 BRONZE said...
on Mar. 12 2010 at 1:07 am
celia<3 BRONZE, Felptons, Connecticut
3 articles 2 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Dog be with you, dog be sweet."

just kidding..... i loved it.... i wanted to sound mean via internet.... i did. HAH intimidating!!!!! i bet u dont know who this is! and i bet they arent in ur spanish class!!!!!

celia<3 said...
on Mar. 12 2010 at 12:54 am
the title should be changed, it was pretty good. grammar errors

on Mar. 10 2010 at 9:50 am
enchanted4yu PLATINUM, Calabasas, California
24 articles 0 photos 103 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't tell me the sky is the limit when there are footprints on the moon"

thank you!

TheJust ELITE said...
on Mar. 10 2010 at 9:42 am
TheJust ELITE, Ellenton, Florida
254 articles 202 photos 945 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I feel that a hero is somebody who will stand up for their values and what they believe in and that can take any form. People that have values and have thought them through rather than those who just do what they’re told."-Skandar Keynes

"When it’

I like it! Really, really good!

on Feb. 27 2010 at 12:58 am
enchanted4yu PLATINUM, Calabasas, California
24 articles 0 photos 103 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't tell me the sky is the limit when there are footprints on the moon"

Thank you so so much

on Feb. 26 2010 at 3:48 pm
Karlynne PLATINUM, Orange Park, Florida
21 articles 0 photos 98 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life isn't about waiting for the storm to pass...
It's about learning to dance in the rain.
-Vivian Greene

its so cute! i love the ryme sceme. and let me tell you, you r reaching teens, well for now atleast one. lol. although im pretty sure im a little mature for my age. you can see it in my eyes.