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June 8, 2011
By IAmWhoIWantToBe PLATINUM, Manila, Other
IAmWhoIWantToBe PLATINUM, Manila, Other
41 articles 0 photos 650 comments

Favorite Quote:
‎"I’m learning how to drown out the constant noise that is such an inseparable part of my life. I don’t have to prove anything to anyone. I only have to follow my heart and concentrate on what I want to say to the world: I run my world." - Beyoncé

An apple from the Garden of Eden
Odd numbers that can never be even
Superman and kryptonite together
Can human nowadays live forever?
A love like that of Romeo and Juliet
Minors in casino the ones that bet
An ogre falling in love with Fiona
Can minors nowadays have some Henna?
Life as hard as that of Bonnie and Clyde
With these things, I do always have to hide
There are rules we do not want to follow
Because we always want to be hollow
But the law is the one that is lawless
There is never anything that is flawless

The author's comments:
If you would ask me why I wrote this poem, I would say "I don't know."
If you look at the poem, you may say that it is nonsense. But take a closer look and you will see what it means. Laws keep us from hurting other people and destroying other things. There are laws created for the good of everyone, I know, like the Ten Commandments. But not all laws are moral.
If my comment is longer than my poem, all I can say is "I'm NOT sorry." But I'm giving you my apologies if it caused you some problems.

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This article has 4 comments.

on Dec. 12 2011 at 6:25 am
CaptainFabulous GOLD, Gray Summit, Missouri
17 articles 0 photos 62 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes I believe in as many as six impossible things before breakfast" - Lewis Carroll

You have some real talent, fabulous poem!

zone7294 GOLD said...
on Aug. 3 2011 at 9:40 am
zone7294 GOLD, Newport News, Virginia
18 articles 0 photos 52 comments

Favorite Quote:
If im good for nothing, then your bad for everything

I'm loving this poem because it's really great 5 stars. I would appreciate it if you would give me some feedback on my poems too.

on Aug. 2 2011 at 7:44 pm
TwasBrilling BRONZE, Staunton, Va, Virginia
4 articles 0 photos 79 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The owl of Minerva spreads its wings only with the falling of the dusk" -H.W. Hegel

"Words are our most inexhaustable source of magic' -Albus Dumbledore

To me, this is about contradictions, morals, fate, ect. I like it, alot!

Emily.L GOLD said...
on Aug. 2 2011 at 4:05 pm
Emily.L GOLD, Gilbert, Arizona
10 articles 12 photos 84 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes, we just have to be happy with what people can offer us. Even if it's not what we want, at least it's something. " -Sarah Dessen

I loved the lines

"But the law is the one that is lawless

There is never anything that is flawless."

Amazing poem. 5 stars!