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Murder He Wrote

January 20, 2012
By AlyssaRose GOLD, Jackson, New Jersey
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"You can't live your life for other people. You've got to do what's right for you, even if it hurts some people you love." - Nicholas Sparks

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Scarlet letters bleed from my bare hands.
His words seep in, stain red my memories.
Murderous touch of poison I can not withstand.
Overwhelmed by goodbye, fall weak to my knees.

Gasping last breathe for one second chance.
Love now forever lost, my heart ceases.
A haze all I see, a light now enhanced.
Alone tucked in by red I rest here in peace.

My life, my love, the air that I have breathed.
Suffocates me now with words of goodbye.
You claim it’s gone, then my dear you may leave.
This knot of our bond I will now untie.

Murdered by farewell I will rest here alone.
It is only a scar that will heal the blood flown.

© Alex D., Russellville, AR

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AlyssaRose GOLD said...
on Mar. 1 2012 at 12:58 pm
AlyssaRose GOLD, Jackson, New Jersey
11 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You can't live your life for other people. You've got to do what's right for you, even if it hurts some people you love." - Nicholas Sparks

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you are so sweet thank you :)!
AlyssaRose GOLD said...
on Mar. 1 2012 at 12:58 pm
AlyssaRose GOLD, Jackson, New Jersey
11 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You can't live your life for other people. You've got to do what's right for you, even if it hurts some people you love." - Nicholas Sparks

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thank you so much :)!
Belluna45 PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 12 2012 at 11:43 am
Belluna45 PLATINUM, Shelbyville, Kentucky
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This is really cool, really detailed one of my favorites :)
AlyssaRose GOLD said...
on Feb. 10 2012 at 9:36 pm
AlyssaRose GOLD, Jackson, New Jersey
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&quot;You can&#039;t live your life for other people. You&#039;ve got to do what&#039;s right for you, even if it hurts some people you love.&quot; - Nicholas Sparks

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Thank you so much for taking the time to read my work, I really appreciate it !
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This is really good and very relatable. I really enjoy reading your work.
leaves-fall-in-Autumn SILVER said...
on Feb. 10 2012 at 1:36 pm
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Hm. The breaks in sentences made me stop and look closer at the words. The language makes me imagine pain, too. Very sad horrible feeling. GOOD job!