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A Beauty Distilled

May 26, 2013
By ladybug8u BRONZE, Ijamsville, Maryland
ladybug8u BRONZE, Ijamsville, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
"An eye for and eye leaves the whole world blind"


T'was but a dream, so swift and fleeting
A beauty that melts with a season's turn
Youth and age all too soon found a' meeting
Brief respite 'fore a bliss'd dreams' adjourn

Though once as fresh as a summers' breeze
Bright colors have faded and turned to ash
Pride long since locked 'way with forgotten keys
Memories of old, lived in a painful flash

Once, I scoff'd at a beauty distilled
I spent a life like a day spends it hours
Cheaply and quickly, no whim unfulfilled
Yet, sweet milk left under sun, now sours

'Tis much too late to incur any yield
Spoiled and rotted, my fate all but sealed


The author's comments:
This sonnet is a response to Shakespeare's 5th and 6th sonnets, in which a young man is urged to seek out a way to distill his beauty and youth. In this sonnet, an old man remembers the days when he was young and vain, and regrets not heeding the advice given to him while he was strong and beautiful.

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