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October 20, 2013
By Jezmondinie PLATINUM, Tonbridge, Other
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Jezmondinie PLATINUM, Tonbridge, Other
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The world is full of magical things patiently waiting for our wits to grow sharper.

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Your fuse is short
your temper frayed
when you get mad
we’re all afraid
you’re not polite
somewhat uncouth
and face it dear
beyond on your youth
a stunning looker
you are not
you graceless act
the drunken sot
and yet despite
these many flaws
I’m forever simply yours

© Michelle B., Blairsville, GA

The author's comments:
I was in class and we were meant to be studying Shakespeare's sonnet 130. Instead I ended up scribbling this in the back of my book.
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on Oct. 25 2013 at 6:43 pm
xG4RY GOLD, East Falmouth, Massachusetts
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This is good; I dig it. But you should work on the punctuation that comes after a line like a: comma, semicolon, period, ect.