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Mispercieve

January 12, 2014
By intrepidechoes SILVER, Dover, New Hampshire
intrepidechoes SILVER, Dover, New Hampshire
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Favorite Quote:
"Logic will get you from A to B. Imagination will take you everywhere." -Albert Einstein


I used to know the lyrics to your grin

And when it was true, I would sing along

But now your frown will only preach its sins

And I fear I’ve lost the words to your song

When you laugh, I almost forget the scars

Even though I see them before my eyes

In your eyes, I once could count all the stars

Now, your deep black holes come as no surprise

I wonder what it was like way back then

If it was better or I was just blind

But I’d give all to hear that song again

If you’ll just sing, I’d gladly keep the time

You are my hero, though it seems naïve

The ones who leave you all just misperceive.


The author's comments:
This poem is about a friend of mine who's going through some tough times and is having trouble seeing the end of the tunnel. Just a reminder to everyone that you're all wonderful, good people, and thank you for reading my poem!

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on Apr. 30 2014 at 8:05 pm
intrepidechoes SILVER, Dover, New Hampshire
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Favorite Quote:
"Logic will get you from A to B. Imagination will take you everywhere." -Albert Einstein

Thank you for the comment! I wasn't sure about that rhyme, but I really loved the last line and I couldn't think of a good way to rearrange it. Thank you so much for reading!!!

on Jan. 17 2014 at 9:58 am
FairToMiddlin SILVER, Durham, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"Give a girl the right shoes and she can conquer the world." -Marilyn Monroe

Aw, love your author's comment. And your poem was very good. Loved the metaphor of the friend to the song. I thought it had a very nice sound to it, and the only rhyme that seemed kind of forced was the one in the very last line. Good job! Sonnets are hard...