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Unexpected Plot Twist

July 22, 2021
By WolfGurl GOLD, Not A Real Place, Indiana
WolfGurl GOLD, Not A Real Place, Indiana
17 articles 4 photos 138 comments

Favorite Quote:
Until one has loved an animal, a part of one's soul remains unawakened. –Anatole France.

A dog is the only thing on earth that loves you more than you love yourself. –Josh Billings

Men are from Earth, women are from Earth. Deal with it.- George Carlin

A nation that destroys its soils destroys itself. Forests are the lungs of our land, purifying the air and giving fresh strength to our people. —Franklin D. Roosevelt

Never lose. Either win, or learn. - Me


Hey. 

 

Once upon a time...


Don’t all good stories start that way? True, not necessarily.


One dark and stormy night…


Better? Cheesy, I know. But still… Which one should we go with?


Wait! Just thought of another one.


A long time ago…


Yeah, we’ll go with that one.


A long time ago, in a land far, far away, there lived a…


What? Let’s see. Wolf pack. Meh, not feelin it. Girl. Hmm. Why not?


A long time ago, in a land far, far away, there lived a girl. 


Okay, that’s a lame, cheesy beginning… Oh well. We’ll keep it, but I’ll stray from that format now. But should I do third person, second person, or first person? Well, I’m the narrator, so… Smugness :) It’ll be…. I forget which is the narrator, but that one. Can I publish this if I forget the persons?      ...hopefully :/


This story starts, looking down on a mansion. The girl, whose name is…


Brenda? Bertha? Bob? Delia? Rebbeca? No...I want something a heroine would have, and feminine and stuff Lavender! Violet! Which one? I’m gonna say… Violet. So,


A long time ago, in a land far, far away, there lived a girl. This story starts, looking down on a mansion. The girl, whose name is Violet, stands in a light blue, beautiful flowing gown. She looks beautiful. 


What next? Let’s see… Um, how about...Plot twist. But what to twist? There is no plot yet. :/   Okay! Got it!


She looks beautiful. Next to her, a rowdy puppy plays happily. Did I mention she’s standing in a meadow behind the mansion? She is.


Hmm. Oh!

 Also, she’s holding a bag. Inside...ARE STOLEN JEWELS!!


To dramatic? Ha! Though she was a good guy, huh? *more smugness* Fine, no plot twists.


She looks beautiful. Next to her, a rowdy puppy plays happily. Did I mention she’s standing in a meadow behind the mansion? She is. Also, she’s holding a bag. Inside...ARE STOLEN JEWELS!! 


Also, she’s holding a bag, which has a few books. Don’t worry. They’re not for reading. You’ll see.


Or not im bored


bye yall



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WolfGurl GOLD said...
on Aug. 2 at 4:39 pm
WolfGurl GOLD, Not A Real Place, Indiana
17 articles 4 photos 138 comments

Favorite Quote:
Until one has loved an animal, a part of one's soul remains unawakened. –Anatole France.

A dog is the only thing on earth that loves you more than you love yourself. –Josh Billings

Men are from Earth, women are from Earth. Deal with it.- George Carlin

A nation that destroys its soils destroys itself. Forests are the lungs of our land, purifying the air and giving fresh strength to our people. —Franklin D. Roosevelt

Never lose. Either win, or learn. - Me

@SparrowSun

XD

ive been wearing my shirt for (hmmm let's see ill estimate)

maybe you dont want to know

i mean its not dirty and im not in school just staying home all day

so what's the point, right?

Also, JustME_Vannya, thank you :)

on Jul. 30 at 9:34 pm
SparrowSun ELITE, X, Vermont
193 articles 22 photos 1019 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It Will Be Good." (complicated semi-spiritual emotional story.)

"Upon his bench the pieces lay
As if an artwork on display
Of gears and hands
And wire-thin bands
That glisten in dim candle play." -Janice T., Clockwork[love that poem, dont know why, im not steampunk]

haha thats great!
your user change is crazy ll never remember it(I'm wearing a wolf t-shirt right now... i may or may not have been wearing it for... what is it now? 3 days?).

on Jul. 30 at 8:56 am
JustMe_Vaanya SILVER, Dehradun, Other
7 articles 9 photos 91 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Una Vida, I have come to accept that I cant experience everything in life. But what I will, I'll experience deeply..."
-Shivya Nath

XD That is soo relatable and a very nice piece... I'm still laughing! Even I used to think like this. Btw, this writing style so very resembles Pseudonymous Bosch's! Oh, I'm adding it to favorites right away..!

WolfGurl GOLD said...
on Jul. 29 at 5:33 pm
WolfGurl GOLD, Not A Real Place, Indiana
17 articles 4 photos 138 comments

Favorite Quote:
Until one has loved an animal, a part of one's soul remains unawakened. –Anatole France.

A dog is the only thing on earth that loves you more than you love yourself. –Josh Billings

Men are from Earth, women are from Earth. Deal with it.- George Carlin

A nation that destroys its soils destroys itself. Forests are the lungs of our land, purifying the air and giving fresh strength to our people. —Franklin D. Roosevelt

Never lose. Either win, or learn. - Me

@Crazywolfiegirl2

I just did check out your stories! LOVE the animal ones.

on Jul. 29 at 3:48 pm
Crazywolfiegirl2 PLATINUM, Kington, Other
27 articles 0 photos 265 comments

Favorite Quote:
When people first meet me, they think I'm really shy, but by the time they get to know me they wonder how the illusion of shyness ever came around!

🤣😂I loved this, pretty much sums up my 7-year-old self when I want to write a story 😂🤣 (and sort of myself now, I'll admit it). I have got through a few stories tho. A few r on teenink, maybe u could check them out? (Ok, some of them are awful, but a few are good, you just have to find the right one, all depends on my level of boredom really) well I've probably said enough now so bye!