Waiting | Teen Ink


June 23, 2009
By Mandiella DIAMOND, Plaistow, New Hampshire
Mandiella DIAMOND, Plaistow, New Hampshire
73 articles 58 photos 349 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't waste time. Start procrastinating now.

I’ve been waiting for a long time.

Waiting for my mom to quit smoking. But it’s never gonna happen.

Waiting for my dad to stop drinking. Never gonna happen.

Waiting for my older sister to get away from her abusive boyfriend. Maybe it will happen someday.

Waiting for my little three-year-old cousin’s body to be free of cancer. It might happen very soon.

Some things never change. You could wait an eternity for them, but nothing happens. It’s like a roller coaster. You stand in line for hours and when it’s finally your turn, the amusement park closes. Bummer.

Sometimes you wait so long for something you imagine is so great. But the wait’s not worth it. When you get to that roller coaster, it’s nothing but a lame kiddie ride that goes around in circles.

So why do people wait?

They wait because of hope. Hope keeps everyone alive. Hope gives you the strength to believe that maybe, someday, some way, something amazing will occur. Hope makes the impossible seem possible.

If you have enough hope, maybe you WILL get to ride the roller coaster eventually. And even if you don’t, keep on believing.

I remember waiting for stuff before. I wait in the lunch line in the school cafeteria. At recess I used to wait to use the swings. I’ve anxiously waited a whole semester to see my report card.

But that waiting was different, because I knew that my goal would definitely be reached. I always got to buy lunch. I always got a chance to swing. Report cards always came out.

With big picture stuff in life, sometimes you just wait forever . . . and ever, and ever. I know I’ll always be waiting for my parents to quit their bad habits. That’s a fact I’ve accepted. But I can still have hope.

Hope is what gets me out of bed in the morning. Without hope, no one would have any reason to believe that when they got up they wouldn’t trip on the rug and plunge out the window to their death.

I have hope that one day my sister might turn her life around and get out of the bad relationship. I have hope that at the next family reunion my cousin will have a head of blonde curls again.

Whatever happens, I just hope that my wait was worthwhile.

The author's comments:
It's not my best piece, but I hope you enjoy it.

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on Aug. 8 2009 at 7:14 pm
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
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"Don't gain the world and lose your soul....wisdom is better than silver or gold."

"You can always close a book, but you can never close the mind of a writer."

after reading your piece "5 things" i had to come back and read some more of your work and im glad i did. again this is a very heartfelt piece and i really enjoyed it! great job :) also, thanks for your comments on my work. on my piece "let it rain" read it not thinking in a realitly/enviromental way, try reading it from a metaphoric/emotional way. you might understand it better :) but again this is a great piece of work...BRAVO :)

on Jul. 3 2009 at 12:53 am
AfricanPrincess95 SILVER, Brooklyn, New York
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Favorite Quote:
you have to fall in order to rise top the top and you have to suffer before you become who u want to and ought to be.

This is a very inspiring poem and it really says alot.