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Of That, I Promise

May 30, 2016
By ANorth8 BRONZE, Tucson, Arizona
ANorth8 BRONZE, Tucson, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
"Out beyond ideas, of right doing and of wrong doing, there is a field. I'll meet you there" -Rumi


She was beautiful, of that I promise. Her long blonde hair reaching just barely to her hipbone; or was it brown with little red streaks, falling only to her shoulders? Or perhaps it was jet black, cut off suddenly and without warning at the nape of her neck, jagged and brooding. It could have been fiery red, then dyed a fierce lavender at the tips, or even all the colors of the rainbow tied into a bun resting atop her head. I can’t remember which it was; but she was beautiful, of that I promise.

 

I loved her eyes. They were the lightest blue you’ve ever seen, with dark spots along the outer rim. Or Maybe it was all dark blue, deep and mysterious, reminding me of the farthest reaches of the ocean. No, they were green. Green like no other green, light but not bright, a subtle, gentle whisper of a green. It’s likely they were brown, perhaps a light coffee with cream kind of brown, or a deep brown; dark eyes to match even darker skin. It escapes me now, what they looked like, but she was beautiful, of that I promise.

 

She had marvelous complexion. Her dark skin was perfect, solid; the deep brown never changed once, from her shoulder to her elbow to her hand. It suited her, it was steadfast. Or was it ever changing? Perhaps her skin was pale, dotted along the arms with moles, patches of white. Her face grew red every time she laughed, flushing out the constellation of freckles residing on her nose. Maybe she was somewhere in between, with a birthmark on her wrist and sun kissed caramel skin. It’s possible it was olive colored, a gorgeous, happy medium. I don’t know where she was on that color scale, but she was beautiful, of that I promise.

 

On a weight scale she was 190 pounds. Her wide hips and full face showed how soft she was, and how grown. She flowed from shoulder to breast to hip to foot with elegance. Or she could have been small, barely 5 feet tall, light as a feather. Her hands had not much padding to them and her features were etched clearly into her face. The wind could blow her wherever it liked, it seemed; showing the sensitive gentle woman she was. Or was she built strong, with defined biceps and large muscles in her legs? I remember she had small breasts and full hips, or was it the other way around; full breasts and small hips? I’ve lost it now, what her body did, but she was beautiful, of that I promise.

 

I wonder now what she looks like, she could be any of these things, I have no clue as to which. There is one thing I do know about her, even though I can’t seem to recall her features. Whatever color, whatever size, whatever hair style, whatever skin. She was beautiful. Of that I promise.


The author's comments:

Beauty is not and never has been one size fits all. YOU are beautiful, of that I promise. 


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ANorth8 BRONZE said...
on Jun. 24 2016 at 2:26 pm
ANorth8 BRONZE, Tucson, Arizona
3 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Out beyond ideas, of right doing and of wrong doing, there is a field. I'll meet you there" -Rumi

Thank you!

on Jun. 23 2016 at 12:31 pm
sassy_scribe_777 BRONZE, Bellingham, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
Friends are God's way of apologizing to us for our families.

You're writing style is gorgeous, and this topic is just as beautiful! Congratulations on yet another amazing article.

on Jun. 17 2016 at 9:52 pm
ambivalent SILVER, West Bend, Wisconsin
7 articles 0 photos 180 comments

Favorite Quote:
everything in life is writable about if you have the outgoing guts to do it, and the imagination to improvise. the worst enemy to creativity is self-doubt. [sylvia plath]

Thank you! That means a lot :)

ANorth8 BRONZE said...
on Jun. 16 2016 at 12:46 am
ANorth8 BRONZE, Tucson, Arizona
3 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Out beyond ideas, of right doing and of wrong doing, there is a field. I'll meet you there" -Rumi

Thank you, it means a lot. I appreciate the feedback, I was going for something that spoke to people without ever forthright stating the image acceptance idea; which was where the repetition came in.

ANorth8 BRONZE said...
on Jun. 16 2016 at 12:42 am
ANorth8 BRONZE, Tucson, Arizona
3 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Out beyond ideas, of right doing and of wrong doing, there is a field. I'll meet you there" -Rumi

Thanks! I'm really happy to hear the message got through

ANorth8 BRONZE said...
on Jun. 16 2016 at 12:40 am
ANorth8 BRONZE, Tucson, Arizona
3 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Out beyond ideas, of right doing and of wrong doing, there is a field. I'll meet you there" -Rumi

Thank You!

ANorth8 BRONZE said...
on Jun. 16 2016 at 12:39 am
ANorth8 BRONZE, Tucson, Arizona
3 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Out beyond ideas, of right doing and of wrong doing, there is a field. I'll meet you there" -Rumi

Thank you so much! I read your fiction story and you have incredible voice! I totally admire your writing

on Jun. 15 2016 at 11:36 pm
ambivalent SILVER, West Bend, Wisconsin
7 articles 0 photos 180 comments

Favorite Quote:
everything in life is writable about if you have the outgoing guts to do it, and the imagination to improvise. the worst enemy to creativity is self-doubt. [sylvia plath]

this is the most uplifting thing i have read in a long time, of that i promise.

Moxiemom said...
on Jun. 15 2016 at 4:48 pm
Just beautiful!!

Moxiemom said...
on Jun. 15 2016 at 4:48 pm
Just beautiful!!

KMG28 SILVER said...
on Jun. 15 2016 at 4:17 pm
KMG28 SILVER, Brooklyn, New York
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Favorite Quote:
“No one is born hating another person because of the color of his skin, or his background, or his religion. People must learn to hate, and if they can learn to hate, they can be taught to love, for love comes more naturally to the human heart than I

Very interesting and fresh way to grasp what's mostly on the media nowadays. The repetition sounds really good here as well. Keep writing inspirational pieces!

on Jun. 15 2016 at 2:43 pm
JMCALLINI BRONZE, Wayland, Massachusetts
3 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You don't write because you want to say something, you write because you have something to say" ~F. Scott Fitzgerald

This piece is amazing and so touching!!