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Heartbroken

December 3, 2009
By Loveandboxing PLATINUM, Levvitwon, Pennsylvania
Loveandboxing PLATINUM, Levvitwon, Pennsylvania
29 articles 0 photos 70 comments

Favorite Quote:
Eat, Sleep, Sing (by me)<br /> Writing is an art few people master it. -me


I lay on my bed crying my eyes out. “I hate him,”
“No you don’t,” My BFF Bell said.
“Yes I freaking’ do!”
“But-but. . .”
“STOP DENFENDING HIM HE CHEATED ON ME!”
“I’m just saying we don’t know what happened yet.”
“I don’t need any physic to tell me what happened! He was on he bench kissing her!” I said rolling over I stared at my ceiling where a picture of him was taped. I got up and ripped it up. “My enemy, he kissed Sasha. And I hate her and him.”
Forever, forever, forever-r-r,
“It’s him,” Bell said. “I’ll answer.”
“’Kay,” I said.
“Hello?” she said in her sweet but I’d freaking kill you in a heart beat. “Oh hi Brad. Yes shes here . . . no she kinda hates you. What? Oh ok hold on. . .”
She put him on speaker. Then she held her finger to her lips letting me know to be quiet.
“Ok,” she said.
“Listen Bell you know I would NEVER EVER cheated on Tina right?”
“I guess. . .”
“Well I wouldn’t. Sasha kissed me . . . it was so fast I was shocked. But trust me it was like kissing a wall, nothing at all like kissing Tina. And after Tina ran away I pushed Sasha and yelled at her. Then I saw Tina and my heart dropped, Bell, it really did. I love Tina. I really, really, really, do love her.”
“You do?” I asked losing it.
“Yeah I love you Tanya.”
“I love you too Brad!”


The author's comments:
awwww love its so cute!

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on Sep. 26 2011 at 7:31 pm
Why does it say 'Tanya' instead of 'Tina' at the end?

on Apr. 17 2010 at 10:40 pm
ShantelTheAuthor BRONZE, North Carrollton, Mississippi
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Favorite Quote:
If you think you can do it go for it!

I really liked yor story

on Apr. 5 2010 at 8:21 pm
Loveandboxing PLATINUM, Levvitwon, Pennsylvania
29 articles 0 photos 70 comments

Favorite Quote:
Eat, Sleep, Sing (by me)<br /> Writing is an art few people master it. -me

thxs and I KNOW

on Apr. 5 2010 at 7:18 pm
Sandywolf BRONZE, Elk Horn, Kentucky
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We&#039;re on a bridge!

Cheating is never fun, let me tell you, haha.

Good dialogue, and a happy ending. My kinda story ;)


on Apr. 4 2010 at 9:00 pm
Loveandboxing PLATINUM, Levvitwon, Pennsylvania
29 articles 0 photos 70 comments

Favorite Quote:
Eat, Sleep, Sing (by me)<br /> Writing is an art few people master it. -me

thxs! i like this but ive writen better. but my best is going to be greenland High.

on Apr. 4 2010 at 4:51 pm
-MidnightAngel- GOLD, A Field Of Paper Flowers, California
11 articles 47 photos 110 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;I believe in everything until it&#039;s disproved. So I believe in fairies, the myths, dragons. It all exists, even if it&#039;s in your mind. Who&#039;s to say that dreams and nightmares aren&#039;t as real as the here and now?&quot;

Awww:') Such a sweet story! I love it:)

on Apr. 1 2010 at 2:55 pm
Loveandboxing PLATINUM, Levvitwon, Pennsylvania
29 articles 0 photos 70 comments

Favorite Quote:
Eat, Sleep, Sing (by me)<br /> Writing is an art few people master it. -me

thxs if you lik this keep an eye out for my latest novel on here called 'Greenland High'

on Mar. 30 2010 at 6:34 pm
thoughtfulsoul PLATINUM, El Cajon, California
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This is cute :) I kinda liked how you only used dialouge.It was something new and different. 

on Mar. 11 2010 at 4:16 pm
Facelton SILVER, Canton, Missouri
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Happiness can be found even in the darkest of times if one only remembers to turn on the light. -Unknown.

aww. that's great.

on Mar. 4 2010 at 2:20 pm
Loveandboxing PLATINUM, Levvitwon, Pennsylvania
29 articles 0 photos 70 comments

Favorite Quote:
Eat, Sleep, Sing (by me)<br /> Writing is an art few people master it. -me

i love this story. . . i think ever girl has been here . . . or will be . . .