Remebering | Teen Ink


January 3, 2009
By Chloe Lozier PLATINUM, Coronado, California
Chloe Lozier PLATINUM, Coronado, California
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I can't shake the feeling that overcomes me when I try to remember that dark and forbidding night that was so long ago.Its still a mystery to me, one that may remain unsolved, forgotten once I'm gone.You were there for me, you were there holding me tenderly, talking to me, making my fears diminish as quickly as the wind takes a candle's flame.

With you there beside me I could see your piercing blue eyes, edged with darkness,and uncertainity.You were there with me until the final hour, a last, first kiss to seal your fate.
And now as I look off into the distance I feel you near me, protecting me, protecting me still and always.

The author's comments:
I would like to comment that this piece was something that I knew I had to write, something that ment alot to me and I knew I had to write it and share it with people. I hope people come to appreciate it as much as I do.

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