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I fell in love with a girl made of music.

September 28, 2009
By kendraelysia SILVER, Turner, Maine
kendraelysia SILVER, Turner, Maine
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Favorite Quote:
"To risk nothing is to risk everything."

When she spoke, it was like music. An escalating crescendo of a Capella music, bouncing and changing at different intervals. At different levels, settings, objectives. Her diction alone made instruments materialize. Her tone, her articulation - like music. The most beautiful music I had ever heard. An alluring music, magical - pulchritudinous, even! A whole orchestra exploding with sound, echoing off the walls, pitched and positioned on the complete center stage. Big. Big music. So much music. A harmonica, a banjo, a flute.

Her instruments when fully materialized, were confidence. When feeling insecurities she would simply stop - stand up right, statuesque and stare. She would not turn, not falter. No decrescendo. Just keep escalating. No silence, no pianissimo. Just keep singing, keep dancing, keep going. But this was rare. No abrupt distractions would follow, no sense of awkwardness. A solider. She was a soldier. A soldier of music. The charm of her was incredible though. Her voice becoming deeply mellifluous. Classy inflection, rather manipulative, but vivid.

See, pretty soon. I had no idea what her face even looked like, or what she wore, or that she even really existed in a physical sense. I mean, she was music.

And who can resist a woman, who is practically made of music?

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on Nov. 16 2014 at 4:41 pm
meaghanm2 BRONZE, Congers, New York
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Favorite Quote:
“Freedom is not worth having if it does not include the freedom to make mistakes.”

~Mahatma Gandhi~

Okay this is amazing. As a musician I can really relate to the feeling... 

on Nov. 26 2010 at 6:11 pm
sabina22 BRONZE, Glen Mills, Pennsylvania
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Aw this was so good and touching :) This kind of reminds me of a guy (not a girl) I know haha, he's very musically talented such as the person you described. Beautifully written! =)

sceneemoboi said...
on Nov. 16 2010 at 2:54 pm
This is wonderful i relate to this when i think about a beaautiful girl..

on Oct. 13 2010 at 2:24 pm

i rellay love this peice it is very romantic and beautiful. this made. it caught me by the first two sentences


on Oct. 13 2010 at 2:21 pm
Your word choice is very vivid.  I love how you said, who can resist a woman, who is practically made of music?

mmerino GOLD said...
on Oct. 13 2010 at 2:07 pm
mmerino GOLD, Littleton, Colorado
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a little confusing, but it made me think! you can tell that you really know what you are talking about!

on Aug. 30 2010 at 2:21 am
onestepcloser-tomydreams BRONZE, Kinuso, Other
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Favorite Quote:
life is not measured by the number of breaths we take but by the number of moments that take our breath away- anonymous

this peice is so amzing and creative!

StoryWriter said...
on Jun. 12 2010 at 6:25 pm
StoryWriter, Montclair, New Jersey
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I LOVE the title! The piece and the title were totally meant to be together!

on May. 12 2010 at 6:22 am
`snickers SILVER, Tarlac, Other
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it's beautiful. very very beautiful. wow.

on Apr. 20 2010 at 8:50 pm
Chanilla SILVER, Clarksville, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
"Die the way you lived, that's the way to go out. Don't drag it out, living like that doesn't mean a thing." - Public Enemies.

I loved it and I think it's just beautiful. I just wish someone would say something like that about me. Haha :-p

on Dec. 11 2009 at 9:39 am
Lucy4himnotu ELITE, Richardson, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"I am Happy to The Point of Fear" -Ralph Waldo Emmerson

Absolutely enthralling. Beautiful. My favorite piece by far!!! Wonderfully written. Thank you!

on Oct. 4 2009 at 4:11 pm
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't gain the world and lose your soul....wisdom is better than silver or gold."

"You can always close a book, but you can never close the mind of a writer."

wow this is one of my favorite pieces on the site! :) i love the title, because it is sooo creative. the content of the story is just beautiful :) i love this! 5 stars :) check out some of my work if you can, i would really love the feedback!