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Blue Awakening MAG
March 21, 2014
Crystal tears glisten
Upon earth's frosted face as
Dawn greets her with warmth
© Barbara S., Hoffman Estates, IL
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Savannainthesky GOLD said...
on Nov. 29 2015 at 6:47 pm
Beautiful!
simple_effect SILVER said...
on Aug. 5 2015 at 5:25 pm
I'm sorry but the goal is to be constructive and/or supportive. I know you are speaking honestly, but those words are very harsh to hear as a writer. Keep it up, WinterRose.
jayman0224 said...
on Apr. 30 2015 at 4:19 pm
to be honest in my opinion this haiku is really bad you shouldn't get any award for that, but it should have at least some type of punctuation.
Angelique_h GOLD said...
on Oct. 22 2014 at 7:04 pm
Wow you really deserve getting published! I love how you make the earth seem like a person, and I love the meaning behind it
Olivia-Atlet ELITE said...
on Oct. 18 2014 at 1:23 pm
Whata heartwarming haiku! I have to say that I find the m,ost joy in reading them, and I especially love this one! The lines flow extremely well, and the imagery is intense :) I can see the face of the Earth, and the "Crystyal tears" Yet again, this poem blew me away :) Congratulations on getting puiblished, you earned it my friend! XD
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND said...
on Oct. 16 2014 at 6:54 pm
Oh, geez Luis. I just want to say this absolutely, beautiful and phenomenal. It's short and simple yet powerful and elegant and phenomenal. It's just beautiful. Congrats on having this published! You truly deserve it! Because you are an amazing and talented and wonderful writer and person; and you have such a talent and greatness and light in you. Believe that, because it is true. I'm so happy, for you. Congrats! :D Thank you so much, for sharing this, my friend! :)
Xena_Zionne GOLD said...
on Sep. 23 2014 at 9:53 pm
so short yet so beautiful. i can give and get a million point of views and story lines from this. lovely. -Caramel kisses
TaylorWintry DIAMOND said...
on Jun. 3 2014 at 10:21 am
Congratulations on the Editors' Choice!
TaylorWintry DIAMOND said...
on Jun. 3 2014 at 10:21 am
Yes! Yes! Yes! This is amazing! I'm like freaking out right now. *five mins later* Okay, sorry for my minor freak-out. I've composed myself. This poem is so awesome. I don't have any word to describe it. But it's gorgeous. I don't think you understand how difficult it is to get actual meaning in a haiku (maybe you do), but it's hard. I can't even do it. So this? This is epic. The personification is purely spot-on, and.. I can't. I'm gonna blow up. But honestly, really really awesome. Really.
sullivano17 PLATINUM said...
on May. 31 2014 at 11:29 pm
love the simplicity of this imagery and personification poem. keep writing i love it
I'm basically echoing sanddycandy, but i agree with her. I really like the simplicity of this piece. Personally i don't love Haiku because of how short it is and i find it's a real skill to get a proper meaning into such a short piece and i think you've done it perfectly. i think if u lengthened it, you could make it better, but other than that i love this :D
Psychedelik said...
on May. 22 2014 at 9:51 pm
This is the shortest poem I've ever seen but it's still really really good. Well done!
albaschirinzi BRONZE said...
on Apr. 16 2014 at 11:23 am
This is lovely!
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